Date: October 12, 2011 3:21 pm Title: "Pineapples..."
Nice. No really, well done. The beginning was a little too sappy for my taste but I guess it was supposte to be that way. And although the death scene went a little fast (I would have liked it a little more slowly to really take the drama of it in) I liked the hug of comfort, what I think they both needed in this moment.
For some reason, the pineapple-just-for-Gus-line made me tear up. That was so sweet at the end. And I liked it that he called Lassiter spontaneausly one last time. And the last line ... pure gold.
Again. Really well written. Honest fics like that are the best. Well done.
Date: September 05, 2011 6:41 am Title: "Pineapples..."
Okay. I have issues. When I know that a fic is sad, I turn of my feelings. Or I try to. I didn't cry, but my hearts feels hollow...
But in contrary, I liked to read this fic. And I like that awkward-hug with Lassie and Shawn.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like to read it, and yea, I thought the awkward Shassie hug was needed... something light in a dark situation, but at the same time, makes the readers see just how dark the situation is that two 'sworn enemies' would hug. I understand the whole, heart feels hollow... it sucks... sometimes it's worse then crying. Thanks for reading. :D Luv, M.H.
Date: September 05, 2011 5:10 am Title: "Pineapples..."
I am now bawling my eyes out. WHY do I read deathfics? They torture me!
Author's Response: I was bawling my eyes out while writing it, so I totally know how you feel. Thanks for reading. :D Check out some of my happier stories as well, the ones in the series 'Proposals' are all fun and light. :D