[Report This]Date: January 28, 2013 9:38 am Title: Survival Has Consequences
I like it. *whines* But I'm confused. You need to finish.
How do you like my impression? I like my impression. And who is this Nile Lewis to Lassie? (I shall dub her West Nile because that's what popped into my head when I saw her name. It might or might not have to do with the little summer/fall epidemic connected to mosquitoes) :D
Fyi: No more deals. Unless you buy me pizza and send it to me nice and fresh.
Date: January 26, 2013 6:25 pm Title: Survival Has Consequences
OH YOU UPDATED I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
Author's Response: I love ya too. And yes, I updated. Luna and I have a deal. If I update, she updates. I think she might break it though.
Date: October 01, 2012 12:05 pm Title: Survival Has Consequences
OMG Jesse I never saw this but it NEEDS continuing!
[Report This]Date: July 30, 2012 9:02 pm Title: Survival Has Consequences
I love this. It's really creepy. But I love it. The way I love Woody. It's bizarre and unusual and I can't get enough of it. In short, you're brilliant. :-) Who would have thought of this?!?!?!?!?!? Amazing!
Date: July 11, 2012 10:44 pm Title: Survival Has Consequences
Your writing style is kind of confusing but I like the story. I'm curious as to how this story will progress...
Date: July 08, 2012 9:03 am Title: Survival Has Consequences
Yes. It seems your writing is improving as the story goes on. I hope later when Lassie knows Shawn is actually Shana we see some GUILT!
Date: July 08, 2012 8:56 am Title: Survival Has Consequences
I like how she got a dangerous glint in her eye and I wonder what our favorite duo is going to do with there suspension time
[Report This]Date: July 07, 2012 9:29 pm Title: Survival Has Consequences
Bahahaha! I was laughing litterally the whole time! It was totally great! :) And for some strange I kept having the feeling her cover as a dude would be blown. Of course I was a little confused with the buritto thing at the end--and why Shawn had such a dangerouse reaction to nearly being punched. Yeah, I know guys have some 'rule' about not punching girls but that kind of thinking is what made Shana do the whole cover up thing in the first place.
Author's Response: She blames a fictional burrito for how uncharacteristical she was by being nice to Lassie.
Date: July 03, 2012 3:00 pm Title: Survival Has Consequences
Interesting as always :)
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: July 02, 2012 4:05 pm Title: Survival Has Consequences
You're making it hard to stick to my review formula, I'll tell you that.
I do like the fact that you tried to think up something different; tried to stand out from the crowd and had the guts to post it online for everyone to comment on.
My constructive criticism: I feel like all you've done is remove the main character and replace them with a gender-confused Mary-Sue. As psych fan reading fanfiction, unless the characterisation of all the characters matches that of the show, I won't be reading those stories on principle. If you're the type to take on criticism, this would mean an entire overall of Shana's mannerisms throughout what you've already written. If you do this then all the referencing of prior episodes is unneeded.
Your banner is cute, I must say. Juliet especially. You captured her spot on! Your clothing style is cool, too. :-)
Author's Response: A Mary-Sue, now I can't have that. Who is Shawn? He pranks, is obnoxious, bragging, over-confident, sometimes caring, cocky, snarky, cracks jokes at the worst time, hyper, reckless, intelligent, observant, jumps to conclusions, usually has the wrong person the first few times, a good liar, etc. Okay, I got it. Shana will be this with just fighting skills and an unpleasant past and present.