Date: February 28, 2011 2:23 pm Title: A new company car
Shawn, Juliet, AND the car all in one fell swoop. You evil mastermind.
;_; Gus is in shock and guh that's too perfect. Because that is too instant for him to really GET it right away. Guh, poor Gus. *hugs him*
He knew for a fact that he was in shock when his only rational thought was that it would be a pain to get a new company car.
Good job, Mia. I liked it a lot. <3
Date: February 28, 2011 2:22 pm Title: A new company car
It huuuuuurts. Owwie. Less than 200 words and it's still powerful, Mia. I really really love how Gus' last thought isn't him drowning in mangst, but rather something completely inane and illogical, because that's FAR more truthful to real life, and it makes more of an impact on the read. Also, Shawn AND Juliet? WTH? Jerk. :P
Loved is, miss. <3
Date: January 15, 2010 10:24 pm Title: My side of the story/Quitter
Ah, nicely done, Mia! I like how you decided on this scene. Poor Gus. He's so hurt by what they did.
Date: January 14, 2010 2:06 pm Title: My side of the story/Quitter
CALLBACK TO ONE OF MY SEASON FOUR FAVS. *fistbump*
And a callback to one of my fav scenes too! I loved that scene when Gus finally told them how hurt he was that they had stolen his girl, and I love that you've elaborated on the scene when Gus finally left.
Date: October 14, 2009 4:59 pm Title: Bus Stop
Awwww...too cute!!!!! I love little Gus! He's so sweet. I really love, for some reason, the "just like his Daddy says it" - it's just sweet. A wonderful little snippet!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Mo! I do enjoy the thought of precocious little!Gus! =)
Date: September 15, 2009 7:33 pm Title: Blood
Oh, I like this - a lot! It's great how you capture Shawn's reasoning for getting involved in the first place - actually, you capture ALL of his reasoning, which is hard to do. And then how you shift it there at the end - perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Mo! =)