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Date: March 08, 2017 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: mcr9874 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2009 3:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

Okay so i read it

 

I love these, they are really long, but in a good way, i like them, they are more case-ficcy

 

So i guess i am gonna go read the next one

 

Thanks

Reviewer: MorganAdams Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 12:36 am Title: Chapter 4

Fantastic job!!! I love the extra storylines - particularly Juliet's brother - that scene was great with Lassiter. Nicely developed characters, an interesting mystery. But, really, my favorite is how you painted Shawn - with some of his serious thoughts thrown in. GREAT EPISODE!!

Reviewer: MorganAdams Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 12:25 am Title: Chapter 3

LOVE IT! So much intrigue and insight into Shawn's mind - which is hard to do and keep the episode feel. I especially like how you have done the memory visions.

This is such an interesting concept: "The derby case had shown him she was still developing as a detective; skilled, yes, but still quick to jump for the easy clues rather than dig deeper for the ones unseen. She needed to develop the instincts that Shawn had allowed her to leave stunted in the wake of his ‘abilities’. "

Reviewer: MorganAdams Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 12:14 am Title: Chapter 2

I can't believe the description and the depth here! So well done. Shawn's reactions to things are just fantastic.

Reviewer: MorganAdams Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1

My apologies for not reviewing sooner - it sort of got away from me there for a while! Anyway, I'm reading now - and looking forward to finishing it up! Great start - excellent descriptions - and a very unique storyline.

Reviewer: patster Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2008 10:51 am Title: Chapter 4

OOOOO!!!! I LOVED THIS EPISODE!

“I’m working my way up. I should be up for a desk soon. Chief Vick’s been hinting.” LOL!

I adored the Fenich scene, with the causual remark about Shawn's past, and then him saying he was proud. And I LOVE that Lassie helped Ben out, that's so cute of him. Thank you for the mental image of Gus and Shawn jumping up and down in an airport, lol. But Gus is leaving now? :( Anyways, AMAZING episode, wonderful job! :)

Reviewer: mia Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27, 2008 9:12 am Title: Chapter 4

Oh no! Gus! He's going to leave, isn't it? Oh GUS! *shakes head*

Also, great wrap-up, great story.. just.. great. All of it! *g*

Reviewer: BringOnTheRain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2008 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm sad it's over! Awesome job with it though. It was really great!

Reviewer: SydneyWoo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24, 2008 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

S_C!  What a wonderful end to a fabulous VS ep!  You have included so many excellently subtle gems it makes it hard to comment.  I'm overwhelmed with goodness!  Thank you for all your hard work on this delightful read:)



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