Date: December 14, 2008 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
AHHH!!! This is like... Suspense torture!!! I keep waiting for something to 'blow up' XD Love this chapter!! cant wait to read the next one!!!
Lots o' love!!!
Tippy
Author's Response: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I'm so glad you like it, and I'm THRILLED that there's tension! I tried really hard to give it that edge!
Date: December 14, 2008 1:05 am Title: Chapter 2
Excellent next chapter, Luna!! As before, the interactions between the characters are great (I, of course, particularly like the subtle conversations between Shawn and Juliet, but they are all really well done). I love the details too - both in the building of the mystery and just in general - it feels like watching an episode. I think you have really captured how Shawn doesn't want to let Gus down and make him mad again. And Lassiter is classic - the donut scene at the beginning is hilarious! WELL DONE!! I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thanks, Mo!! It makes me so endlessly happy that you like the way the characters interact in my stuff. And YAY that it feels like an episode! This is so rushed I can hardly tell what it feels like! Thank you so much, I really appreciate it!!
Date: December 13, 2008 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, Shaaaawn! This whole time I'm torn between being annoyed at Shawn for screwing stuff up in the first place. Then I'm annoyed at Lassiter. And when Lassie finally improved I got massively and HUGELY annoyed with Vick.
I also love the Boy Meets World reference! And this whole chapter! I can't wait to see where you're taking this!
Author's Response: lololololol Pretty much everybody is wreaking havoc in this episode. I'm glad you're enjoying it though, even though the characters are annoying you. XDDDDDDDd Thank you for the awesome review! :D
Date: December 13, 2008 11:05 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh shit. This isn't looking so good for Shawn. Interesting turn of events. Can't wait to see what's coming next!
Author's Response: LOL. Shawn never catches a break. ;D I hope it lives up to your expectations!