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Date: September 08, 2017 1:58 am Title: Sunday

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Reviewer: IcEKoLd Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2009 12:03 pm Title: Sunday

Dear Writer,

Your writing astounds me.  I have long fingernails on both hands, but one of them is too short now.  I bit it down to nothing while I anxiously read this story. 
I think I am in love with Virtual Season now that I understand them better.  I just need to stop reading the book backwards and start from the beginning.
So again, thanks for the mad entertainment and I'll be back!  Fingernail and all!



Author's Response:

Dear Addicted,

as I gather from a recent study, fingernails are prone to grow back ;) However, biting down on them is a bad habit, and I feel bad for being the cause of this. However, I think I'll just take it as a compliment in this case.

And you are absolutely right - reading the VS from start to finish it's going to make a lot more sense. I'd really advise you to do it, a lot of planning and effort went into it and I think the single stories all connected so well. Enjoy it, and thanks for the awesome review.



Reviewer: IcEKoLd Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2009 2:32 pm Title: Saturday

Great chappy! 

"Come on Gus, don't be a cheerless Cheerio!"  LOL  That is my favorite "Don't be a ..." line.  :D 

I also like the part that Shawn had to go to Jules and hum the song in her ear.  Aww, that was too cute! <3 

Reviewer: IcEKoLd Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2009 11:08 am Title: Thursday (part 2)

Hehe, I just have to say that I am so in love with the way you portray Shawn's humorous tactics. 

Eager enough to help on a case, but lazy enough not to help with the paperwork.  Poor Buzz.  haha

Oh and Gus' reaction to Shawn showing off the comic book.. oh oh!  Let's take a vote now.  XD  I really wonder how you pull these people off so well.  Going from insane Shawn to serious Gus.  It's quite a personality switch. 

Reviewer: astridfire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2009 9:29 pm Title: Sunday

Aww, I was really happy for them too.  :(  Ah well. 

 This story was excellent!  :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I so wanted them to win the money, alas - it simply couldn't be. Glad you liked the story, though. Thanks a lot for the review.

Reviewer: Tine Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2009 5:16 pm Title: Thursday (part 2)

That Buzz scene was magic. We rarely hear from him, so his various lines of dialogue were awesome to read.

Author's Response: Thanks. Buzz is such an awesome character, he deserves some love :D Glad you liked it, thanks a lot.

Reviewer: SilentlyRead Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2009 6:31 pm Title: Sunday

I really enjoyed this fic, I think you did an excellent job showing the interactions of every character.  I also thought you did a good job in uniting 3 different cases to one perpetrator.  I felt your Gus/Shawn friendship was very strong and that you mastered their dialogue perfectly.  

The only thing you need to fix in your story is the fact that west of the Mississippi, radio call stations start with K.  So instead of WKLX it would have to be something like KKLX.

Keep up the great writing.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot. I feel repetitive, but writing this VS really was insanely different from what I normally write, all the more I'm glad about everyone who enjoyed this story.

And thanks for the info about the radio stations. Not being an American, I actually had no idea that there was a system, lol. I just remembered a lot of radio stations from movies and TV-shows starting with W, so I used that. I honestly don't know if I'll go back and change it since I used that acronym so often (and I am kinda lazy *cough*), but I am definitely keeping it in mind. And now that I know that it's wrong, I'll probably change it despite the laziness because I hate mistakes...*grumbles*

Thanks a lot for the review. 

Reviewer: MorganAdams Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2009 2:29 pm Title: Sunday

Oh, LittleFairy, I'm so sorry! I meant to leave a review, and, somehow, it was right during the time when I was travelling, etc. ANYWAY, WELL DONE!!!! It felt very real - like I was watching it. And, since this is VS, that is exactly what I always look for!! The interactions were spot on as was the build up of the mystery. You did a beautiful, beautiful job throughout!! You should be very proud!!

Author's Response: Awww, thanks Morgan. And don't worry about when you leave the review. I'm patient, lol. And I'm so glad you liked it. In the end, writing a VS was completely different from what I had imagined it to be, and there were moments when I was cursing this thing with the worst words imaginable. So in the end I was just glad that it was finished, lol. But I'm glad you liked it, thanks so much for the great review.

Reviewer: lbgirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2009 5:27 pm Title: Sunday

"Yeah, and Pamela Anderson's boobs could be real. Come on Gus, how many criminals do you know who have a library card and watch Discovery Channel?"  Roflololol I laughed so hard when I read that.  I loved everything about this story.  The flow was great, characterization was wonderful and the concept was brilliant.  I had no clue until the last possible moment that everything was connected.  I love it when stories are not predictable.  You are a very gifted writer.  Great job!!!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! This story cost me a grey hair or two since it was so different from everything else I've written. I'm glad to see that it has worked out for you and that you enjoyed the story. Thanks a lot for the great review!

Reviewer: mia Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2009 3:28 pm Title: Sunday

Oh, that's just mean! I mean, I knew the whole prize money thing was too good to be true, but I was still hoping!

Anyway, onto the other stuff. I really liked your wrap-up at the house. It felt very Psych-like. As did the ending bit with Shawn and Gus. And of course some good old-fashioned Shawn whump is never a bad thing. And yeah, a really really good episode, Laura!

I'm also very impressed with how well you write about Santa Barbara. Have you ever been there? If not, great research! I'm impressed!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked it mia. It was exhausting, but all in all it was really fun to write.

As for Santa Barbara - I had help there. Dragonann suggested one of the landmarks I used as locations, and TheOneBlueGecko lived in Santa Barbara for a while and helped me a lot with fititng the right locations into the story to make it more credible. Glad to see their efforts paid off.

Thanks a lot for the great review and believe me, I wanted to give them the money and push that little problem off for Jenn to solve in her episode, but I just couldn't do that... ;-) 

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