Date: January 24, 2009 1:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love how you say that Shawn really needs to find this gril, and that she's haunting him, only to find out that she's dead. That must be so horrible for him, and I love the angst with that. I think Shawn is in unfamiliar territory right now, with a dead child, and he's really distressed that something like this could happen. I also love the lose-lose situation that you're putting him through, and I'm interested to see what he does. Can't wait for more Rain!!! <3
Author's Response: Thanks for the amazing review, patster! I thought this was kind of a unique situation that I haven't really read before (not to say that the other fics don't exist) and I wanted to give my own version of it. Anyway, thanks so, so much for the review and I'll give you an update soon!
Date: January 24, 2009 10:56 am Title: Chapter 4
Oooh, I love your Angsty!Shawn--you've finally put him in a situation that he can't just joke his way out of. I can't wait to read more, especially the way Juliet will react to a Shawn concerned about an ethical dilemma, not a flirty Shawn.
Thanks for the awesome review! I also love angsty Shawn. It's pretty fun to write! Thanks again and you'll see Juliet's reaction pretty soon.
Date: January 24, 2009 1:51 am Title: Chapter 4
I;m definately still interested! I love the twist with the wife, and good job on the explaination. I really like how much it's affecting Shawn too! Hooray for more chapters!
Thanks! I thought the wife would be a good twist..I hope it worked! And I kinda wanted to write angsty Shawn (because we all love angsty Shawn!!) so this was pretty interesting to write. Thanks again for the review!
Date: January 23, 2009 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
I had a feeling from a chapter or so ago that it would be the mom (told you i'd try and solve it! :) ) but I had no idea that it would be because of schizophrenia! Oooh, I'm excited for the wrap-up! :)
Author's Response: Haha thanks! When you reviewed the last chapter suspecting the mom, I was like "Oh no! I'm predictable!!" hahaha. There are still three chapters left, so we'll see what'll happen :D Thanks for the great review!