Date: January 26, 2009 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yay Jules, always the voice of reason--and the maker of delicious breakfast :) I can't wait to see how the trio deals with finding the evidence!
Haha very true--Jules is always the voice of reason. Thanks so much and I'll update soon!
Date: January 26, 2009 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yay! I do love this chapter so much - you have such a great balance between the seriousness of the case and their flirting banter. And the added part to the Gus phone call works very well.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I loved this chapter too..I really like writing flirtacious banter between Shawn and Juliet. Thanks again, Mo!
Date: January 25, 2009 10:50 am Title: Chapter 4
That's such a terrible situation Shawn is in. I really feel for David. Either choice leads to heartbreak. You did a fantastic job at providing a no-way-out situation. I really don't know wht I would do in that scenario. Awesome job again!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really tried to make it as angsty as I could without going totally OOC. Thanks so much for the review! I really, really appreciate it!
Date: January 25, 2009 10:23 am Title: Chapter 4
Yay! Shawn figured it out and Jules gets to be in the story.
I couldn't leave Juliet out of the story! It would be incomplete without her! And thanks for the review!
Date: January 24, 2009 1:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love how you say that Shawn really needs to find this gril, and that she's haunting him, only to find out that she's dead. That must be so horrible for him, and I love the angst with that. I think Shawn is in unfamiliar territory right now, with a dead child, and he's really distressed that something like this could happen. I also love the lose-lose situation that you're putting him through, and I'm interested to see what he does. Can't wait for more Rain!!! <3
Author's Response: Thanks for the amazing review, patster! I thought this was kind of a unique situation that I haven't really read before (not to say that the other fics don't exist) and I wanted to give my own version of it. Anyway, thanks so, so much for the review and I'll give you an update soon!
Date: January 24, 2009 1:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
“Some dude has my number mixed up with a Chinese restaurant, and no matter how many times I tell him I don’t have General Tso’s chicken, he keeps calling.” ROFL my favorite line! It's such a Shawn thing to say, and I love it! <333
LOL, I love that Shawn made gus ride the horse XD. That was such a great visual image, and I love that Shawn made him not only ride, but ride the most wild horse in the ranch. ROFL.
I like the Adrian's character, and I love that even though she doesn't believe in psychics she's willing to overlook that for Viv's sake. And speaking of Viv, she's another great character of yours! I love how her she's so sweet and innocent that even Shawn, who has never met her, loves her. I hope she gets found, and isn't dead/messed up like Gus thinks she is, though I can get why he thinks that, and I like that you've expressed the option that Viv might not be okay. Great chapter Rain! =)
Date: January 24, 2009 10:56 am Title: Chapter 4
Oooh, I love your Angsty!Shawn--you've finally put him in a situation that he can't just joke his way out of. I can't wait to read more, especially the way Juliet will react to a Shawn concerned about an ethical dilemma, not a flirty Shawn.
Thanks for the awesome review! I also love angsty Shawn. It's pretty fun to write! Thanks again and you'll see Juliet's reaction pretty soon.
Date: January 24, 2009 1:51 am Title: Chapter 4
I;m definately still interested! I love the twist with the wife, and good job on the explaination. I really like how much it's affecting Shawn too! Hooray for more chapters!
Thanks! I thought the wife would be a good twist..I hope it worked! And I kinda wanted to write angsty Shawn (because we all love angsty Shawn!!) so this was pretty interesting to write. Thanks again for the review!
Date: January 23, 2009 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
I had a feeling from a chapter or so ago that it would be the mom (told you i'd try and solve it! :) ) but I had no idea that it would be because of schizophrenia! Oooh, I'm excited for the wrap-up! :)
Author's Response: Haha thanks! When you reviewed the last chapter suspecting the mom, I was like "Oh no! I'm predictable!!" hahaha. There are still three chapters left, so we'll see what'll happen :D Thanks for the great review!