Reviewer: Checkerz Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2012 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh! I KNEW it was Eliza all along! *does little jig Oh yeah! I was right! Really liked the story--and it was kind fun(ish) to watch Shawn nearly get killed over and over again

Reviewer: dragonnan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2010 12:28 am Title: Chapter 4

First off, congrats on the epic completion!!

You show what a craftswoman you are with this whole story and it was a full on honor to read it!! While I knew many of the ins and outs of what was planned, it was still a delightful and wonderful shock to realize Shawn was the murderee!!

Eliza, OMJ, I LOVED that wicked woman!! She was soo naughty and clingy and made our poor boy terribly distressed! And on top of that, her plans were all wrapped up in hurting him!! Emotional and physical whumping at its best!

My heart jumped about thirty different directions during the “trailer goes swimming” scene! The attempts to escape coupled with the phone argument was absolutely spot on Psych! It was one of my favorite moments in this fic! (but not my only favorite by any means!)

I really love how this all came together and you truly did a wonderful service with you story! I love the mini mystery of what Henry was up to and it culminated in a really sweet and heartbreaking moment! It wove itself throughout the story and tied up the open ending of Gus abandoning his boy in such a wrenching way! Shawn was the puppy left at the side of the road by owners who could no longer care for him. For the tears that cause, I stab and salute you all at once!

I look forward to rereading this fic again all in one shot! It's the best elements of fic all in one sweet sweet package!



Author's Response: *huggles you to death* Your enthusiasm and support means so much I can't even begin to express it. I think half the reason I kept going at all was because of your reviews. Whenever I needed a reminder of why I was going to finish the damn thing come hell or high water, I just came back and read your reviews. I was always far more motivated after that. So thank you. Thank you thank you thank you for being so awesome. It means so much.

Reviewer: Tippy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2010 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 4

D= it was going so well!!! What happened?!?!?! Gus?!!? no fairs! Great finish tho this episode!!! Very well done and worth the wait =D Thanks so much!!!!

Reviewer: Mel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2010 2:43 am Title: Chapter 4

Ahhhh...very nice finish. What a sad image of Shawn, watching Gus drive away. :-)  I look forward to the next episode!

Reviewer: Lindsey Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2010 3:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

HI I really like this story & I hope you write a new chapter soon.

Reviewer: koalaxninja Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2010 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Dude, I love this story! I've read it around three times since I got into Psych and its fanfiction last summer, and it just keeps getting better and better. Only problem I have with it is that it isn't finished! You've written a lot of great stories since this one, which I have read avidly, yet I see no sign of you coming back to finish this one. Please tell me you're going to finish it? One more chapter, that's all I ask! I'm not above begging. Or bribing. I can buy cookies just as easy as the next person. O_O Haha, but seriously, this was one of the first Psych stories I read, and I'd love to see it finished!

Reviewer: Kirei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2010 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey are you ever going to resolve that cliffhanger?  Ever?  Please?  It's never too late to finish a fic.  ^_^

Reviewer: Tippy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2009 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

OMG! I finally get the time to sit down and catch up on this fic and i get another insane Cliffhanger!?!?!?!?!!?! *dies* I reaaaaaaaaaally hope the next chapter comes soon=D *places a plate of pina colada cookies on the table* just a sample of my gratitude! This is an amazing fic! I can't wait to read more!

Lots o love!


Reviewer: Miss41104 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2009 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

oh no!!!!!  pls make Henry alive!!!!  can't wait for the next update!!!

Reviewer: Tazmy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2009 11:20 am Title: Chapter 1

I also read chapter one on the plane. I absolutely loved the description in this and Lassiter was just perfect. :)

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