Date: September 03, 2022 5:59 am Title: Chapter 1
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Date: April 20, 2010 6:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
HI I really like this story & I hope you write a new chapter soon.
Date: February 16, 2010 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude, I love this story! I've read it around three times since I got into Psych and its fanfiction last summer, and it just keeps getting better and better. Only problem I have with it is that it isn't finished! You've written a lot of great stories since this one, which I have read avidly, yet I see no sign of you coming back to finish this one. Please tell me you're going to finish it? One more chapter, that's all I ask! I'm not above begging. Or bribing. I can buy cookies just as easy as the next person. O_O Haha, but seriously, this was one of the first Psych stories I read, and I'd love to see it finished!
Date: January 14, 2010 12:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey are you ever going to resolve that cliffhanger? Ever? Please? It's never too late to finish a fic. ^_^
Date: July 03, 2009 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I also read chapter one on the plane. I absolutely loved the description in this and Lassiter was just perfect. :)
Date: March 11, 2009 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Any chance for an update on this soon? I miss it!
Date: February 14, 2009 6:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
The sky looked like it was raining fire. OMG! I LOVE your description of the explosion, and this line especially is great! I can really see the scene in my mind, it's like I'm watching it happen and that line is almost poetic, I love it. It als adds a lot of drama to the scene which I love.
He trailed off as Eliza tugged down the oxygen mask covering his mouth, eyes widening when she leaned forward and kissed him soundly on the mouth. The reporters went wild. LMFAO!!!!! WIN! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD The visual image of that is making me giggle non-stop. XD
Gus glanced in the direction he'd pointed and shook his head. "You didn't even read the books, Shawn." Gus is a Twilighter! o/ HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA ROFL I can SO see that, and I can see Shawn not reading the books too.
Gus gave him a look. "Shawn, you sound like the Christian Bale version of Batman." LMFAO! Batman references for the win! And Shawn sounding like Bale in it is so hot, mmm. XD
His eyes swung around toward them and his eyes widened a fraction before he threw his arms up to block his eyes. "Dear God, why are you wearing skirts?! That's not something I ever wanted to see!" ROFLROFL I love Lassie. This is so something he would do, and I can just see him being pained to see them in tunics. LOL love it.
But he changed his grip on Shawn in order to support him better as he coughed, even as he continued the steady march forward. LASSIE <33333333333 I love how he's so caring, yet still IC here, and I LOVE that he took Shawn to the ambulance. I love when we get to see that softer side of Lassie, and it shows that he really does care. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
Gus turned on him, his expression fierce. "Don't belittle my feelings Shawn! I thought that tent was going to fall on you!" This is my favorite part of the chapter for sure. I mean GUH! It reminds me of Lassie Did A Very Bad Thing when Shawn belittles Juliet's feelings about Lassie being suspected of murder, which makes me think Shawn doesn't always know where to draw the line when it comes to things like that I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE worried!Gus! I love that we see how worried he was that Shawn was dead or hurt and how angry he is at Shawn for brushing it off and belittling Gus's feelings on the subject. That little moment between them made me let out a little squee, and I LOVE it! <333333
"I'm right here," Lassiter said, materializing out of a dark corner. All three of them jumped. ROFL PHANTOM LASSIE! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA!!! XD
"Most things don't when they're not in Shawnglish." LMAO SHAWNGLISH! I love that you brought that from his blog! I also love that Gus acknowleges that Shawn lies and how he always puts his own spin on the truth, it's a great moment between them. <3
I'm VERY intrigued by the Henry story line, and I really want to knw what's going on! I love the angst that it's creating for Shawn and Henry.
I love that Jules gets to be the hero in this, and that Lassie is really down right now but nobdy really notices. LOVE what you're doing with these characters, and this fic has turned out really good!
I really love how you described the explosion scene at the beginning and the whump, it's great and I really feel like I'm watching it happen.
I've said what I've thought of Gus in this before, but I'll say it again, he's amazing! You do a great job with him.
Shawn in the costume LOLOLOLOL
THE CALVES! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ROFLROFLROFL
Someone screamed and Shawn turned just in time to see the chopper cam take a sharp nosedive, plummeting straight for him. OMGWTFNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. You can't leave it here! That is an amazingly awesome mental image that you gave me, but I need to know what happens! Hopefully more whump. ;D LOOOOOOOOVE the fic so far Lu, please update soon!! <3
Date: February 12, 2009 1:11 am Title: Chapter 1
You're keeping me on pins and needles with this one. Ouchie :) ! But it's a good suspenseful pain. Nothing like the poor pain Shawn has been subjected to.
Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 09, 2009 7:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh dear. This is looking mighty dangerous for our favorite psychic... but really, it was only a matter of time before they started targeting Shawn. He's very whumpable.
I love the story you and Jenn have got going here. :) It's fifteen kinds of awesome.
Date: February 08, 2009 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sorry I'm late! Just had a chance to read!! Excellent continuation from the last chapter. The description of Shawn being hurt was really well done. And the banter! OMG - the banter is awesome! You really capture the friendship between them - and the slightly abusive side of it as well! I love the scene where Lassiter just manhandles Shawn into the ambulance - I've bee waiting for something like that to happen. Great build-up of the mystery - you've got me hooked. And a nice cliffhanger there at the end. WELL DONE, LUNA!!