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Date: February 12, 2017 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is one of my favorites. Loved the "weapon" of choice for this story. I also loved how true to character Henry and Gus were written (makes the whump all that more satisfying). Definitely will be re-reading for years to come (unless I accidentally catch a snail.)
Date: November 05, 2009 5:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Totally awesome!!! Now that I'm reading your "And then the world blew up" story, I decided to read some of your other stories, and once again I'm very glad I did!!! I'll admit I was a little slow on the uptake here, thinking Shawn had been bitten by a snake when the title of your story is "Snail Mail" (I didn't know that snails could bite, thus my confusion). Anyway, great story, and much more original than anything I could ever come up with. Loved it, and keep on writing because you are totally amazing at it!
Date: June 21, 2009 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I was going to go through and list all the things I liked, but that would be too long and I'm lazy. But, as I said, I really think that this is very Psych-ish and I could easily see this on the show. I thought the way you started off was brilliant, and Shawn cursing his reflexes and comparing himself to a superhero was brilliantly in character.
And the pacing of everything was brilliant as well, especially, as Shawn noted, when the scientist was conversing with him and laying out his plan as though he were in a spy movie.
Shawn remembering the layout of the room was a good way of bringing his skill set and acknowledging, in this particular setting, that he couldn't use it.
And the way you ended it was an excellent way of tying it all up. Especially with just straight up Gus dialogue.
Author's Response: Hey NB - *is ashamed for lateness in responding* Thank you so very much! Your comments are wonderfully kind and I LOVE hearing what you liked best in the story. It makes me smile madly (not unlike the scientist) and muss up my hair (also, not unlike the scientist). You are awesomely wonderful! *fist bump*
Date: April 09, 2009 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, what a nice little story that was filled with awesome whump. >w< Loved it! Especially the last little bit. XDD
Author's Response: Wheeee! Thank you so much for the awesome review. I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. I was a little worried about how to end it and then BAM! it just all fell together...*phew*.