Date: August 09, 2007 5:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
I can't stop crying.
This story is breaking my heart.
Date: August 09, 2007 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
Good GOD woman. Could you have possibly written this more brilliantly? Juliet's breaking down is so perfectly her and so perfect for the situation while being something refreshingly different than the usual guilt and blah blah blah. It's fantastic. I love that we get how they've really all become close friends in this one, and I love even more that it concludes with her contemplating the possibility of a relationship between she and Shawn. I love that she's interested but still wary because of Shawn's unpredictability and that it's her desire to see that he keeps that which really stops her from pursuing it. It's really fantastic. You have such beautiful insights into these characters, damn you! I love it.
And I totally understand what you mean about relationships coming to frutition meaning the death of a show. It's very depressing. Somebody needs to write a show where the characters can get together, and the show can still kick ass. Seriously.
Anyway, fabulous writing. I love this chapter, and I'm super excited for the next. :D
Date: August 09, 2007 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
I loved that! It fits so well with the feel of the show. I like the hope that something may or may not happen. This story is amazing and has my stomach turning with sadness every time I read a chapter. You have to make Shawn recover. You're killing me with all this hopelessness. I feel so bad for Gus, Dad, and Jules. Go Shawn go! Please, please don't kill him. Have I mentioned you are a marvelously talented author.
Date: August 09, 2007 4:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Loved it! One of the best stories I have ever read. I can't wait to read more.
Date: August 08, 2007 3:25 am Title: Chapter 4
Cool chapter and character
Date: August 07, 2007 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
great story, love the emotions that are shwon between the two - and sam - definitely just friends though
Date: August 07, 2007 1:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great job. Clearly, you're working on a different level here. :-)
Date: August 07, 2007 9:09 am Title: Chapter 4
Very nice story. I also love how you portray Shawn and Gus' relationship. As for the shules thing.... Maybe you could just shelve it? I'm really leaning more for the just friends thing although there is little doubt in my mind that the two will inevitably end up together. Update fast please!
Date: August 07, 2007 6:54 am Title: Chapter 4
I'd really prefer the just friends angle, mostly because I feel like the characters in the show haven't quite built up to the point where there can be anything like that.
Date: August 07, 2007 4:25 am Title: Chapter 4
I really love this story. I would like to see a Sules but only if it's not too mushy. Please update soon.