Reviews For Family: The Built in Support System
Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2009 12:57 am Title: Blood
Date: August 20, 2009 12:57 am Title: Blood
I love it! She is cute!
Reviewer: Forever_Darling Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2009 2:02 pm Title: Introduction
Date: August 14, 2009 2:02 pm Title: Introduction
These one-shots are really cute. Keep up the good work haha =)
Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2009 7:55 pm Title: Silence
Date: August 11, 2009 7:55 pm Title: Silence
It wasn't horrible, so you can feel okay about it. I liked it!
Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2009 10:13 pm Title: Smile
Date: August 08, 2009 10:13 pm Title: Smile
Aww!!!!!!! I like Lassie liking her smile!!!!!
Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2009 2:57 am Title: Memory
Date: August 03, 2009 2:57 am Title: Memory
I love how you did a flashback, then present time!!!!!
Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2009 4:40 pm Title: Breathe Again
Date: August 01, 2009 4:40 pm Title: Breathe Again
Hahahhaha That's hilarious!
Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2009 2:36 am Title: Innocence
Date: July 01, 2009 2:36 am Title: Innocence
Aww! That was soooooo sweet!
Reviewer: Collegekid06 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2009 10:02 pm Title: Heaven
Date: June 21, 2009 10:02 pm Title: Heaven
Not a bad start, but I would suggest taking the time to expand your ideas. Invest in your characters, in description, in more dialgoue. Make sure each story has a natural arc and a natural resolution.
Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20, 2009 12:26 am Title: Break Away
Date: June 20, 2009 12:26 am Title: Break Away
Hahahahha I love how Lassie's totally cool with it, too!
Reviewer: LSpencer11 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2009 4:48 pm Title: Light
Date: June 09, 2009 4:48 pm Title: Light
All three chapters so far are really cute. Keep going!