Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2009 12:57 am Title: Blood

I love it! She is cute!

Reviewer: Forever_Darling Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2009 2:02 pm Title: Introduction

These one-shots are really cute. Keep up the good work haha =)

Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2009 7:55 pm Title: Silence

It wasn't horrible, so you can feel okay about it. I liked it!

Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2009 10:13 pm Title: Smile

Aww!!!!!!! I like Lassie liking her smile!!!!!

Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2009 2:57 am Title: Memory

I love how you did a flashback, then present time!!!!!

Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2009 4:40 pm Title: Breathe Again

Hahahhaha That's hilarious!

Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2009 2:36 am Title: Innocence

Aww! That was soooooo sweet!

Reviewer: Collegekid06 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21, 2009 10:02 pm Title: Heaven

Not a bad start, but I would suggest taking the time to expand your ideas. Invest in your characters, in description, in more dialgoue. Make sure each story has a natural arc and a natural resolution.

Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20, 2009 12:26 am Title: Break Away

Hahahahha I love how Lassie's totally cool with it, too!

Reviewer: LSpencer11 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2009 4:48 pm Title: Light

All three chapters so far are really cute. Keep going!



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