Date: October 24, 2016 9:19 pm Title: The Present and the Past (Epilogue)
Okay so first off, great job with Lassie and Juliet's friendship, and keeping them in character. I felt like you pulled both off very well. Also, dang this was scary! As a woman myself, I was screaming internally throughout the whole part that Jules was in danger, thinking "that could be me..." You definitely did a great job pulling at my emotions in so many wonderful and terrible ways (which is a compliment by the way, despite having the word "terrible" in it). I'm excited to read more of your stories, as this is the second one I've read and I immensely enjoyed both. Keep up the good work! (Can't say that I like the swearing though, but I am glad for the warnings, and that it isn't too excessive, so thanks for that.)
Date: September 14, 2013 9:46 pm Title: The Present and the Past (Epilogue)
Really loved the story. And I didn't find either of them out of character. They are both human and both going through a lot personally. I think you captured their personalities very well.
Date: July 05, 2012 8:47 pm Title: The Present and the Past (Epilogue)
Aww, I love Lassie the Protector! The movie night and bonding were adorable:) I'm really glad that Carlton was there for Jules- she really needed someone! At least that creep is taken care of!