Date: June 26, 2009 4:47 pm Title: Mr. Sandman's On Vacation
Luna, good to see you back writing! This was great - just the right amount of emphasis on the case as a background and then the rest is all the effects on Shawn. Poor guy - you just feel sorry for him! I particularly like how you have the others react to him. Juliet is great - she's so caring. As is Gus, who is looking after him. Even Lassiter's typical gruffness is there but tempered with reluctant sympathy. Nice!
Author's Response: Oh, man, it's good to be writing again, let me tell you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I felt very cruel while I was writing it. xD
Date: June 26, 2009 3:17 pm Title: Mr. Sandman's On Vacation
Good fic Luna. It was sweet. Also, not making the case the forefront of the fic worked really well for the purpose of the fic to show Shawn sleep deprived.
Author's Response: Thank you, Stray! I'm really glad that worked. I didn't want the case to wind up getting preference over the sleep deprivation, since it's a one-shot about that in particular. Thank you so much for the review.
Date: June 26, 2009 9:47 am Title: Mr. Sandman's On Vacation
SHAWN OMJ!!! GAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
HOLY FREAKING COW HOW ADORABLE AND SMISHY IS THAT!!??
Oh this is way above and beyond any simple sleeping weird fantasy! This is SLEEP WHUMP AWESOMETACULARNESS!!!!
OMJ!!! You have WIN written all over you!!! You not only gave me sleep- but you gave me insomnia!!!! And crazy-tired Shawn!! And concerned Lassy!!! And, and, FAINTING WHUMP!! And BLOODAGE!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR EPIC AWESOMENESS!!!!!!
*stealz fic and growls at anyone approaching*
*flails and is ded!!!*
*dies of teh happy* You're the best drag. EVER.
I can't wait to fulfill some of your other requests. xDDDDDDDDDDDdd