Date: June 11, 2018 3:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Lol you know it's kind of funny when I was reading this I thought... "Man, this is the most cliche "Oh no Shawn was randomly shot!" fic I've ever read"... And then I had to slap myself as I looked at the date and realized this was on of the first fics on the site, in comparison. So, in other words, all of those other ones are cliche, and you're the original one lol.
[Report This]Date: March 21, 2010 6:36 am Title: Chapter 1
This was pretty good, but I think you should definately get a Beta. Some of the mistakes were the kind that make the reader pause and if the reader has to pause and think about the mistake then they don't get fully invested in the story. Good concept, though!!
[Report This]Date: August 21, 2007 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
great story!! I'm glad that Shawn's okay. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it!! Yea . . . you can't kill off Shawn!! I mean, that's just wrong!! lol!! Thank you again!
[Report This]Date: August 06, 2007 2:11 am Title: Chapter 1
It seems I'm getting a lot of responses to my challenge...and this is a good one. I really like, and please keep up the good work and writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! To tell you the truth I had a BLAST writing it! That challege you put up was good...I enjoy reading about Shawn-getting-hurt stuff...Anyway thank you again!
Date: August 06, 2007 12:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Not bad. I liked the line about Lethal Weapon 2.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!