Reviews For Zealous She Was
Reviewer: Cheye13 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2012 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like the idea - both the style and the characterization. There are some awkward future/present/past tense changes, but the message gets across. I think this is a cool exercise for maybe starting a full-length story. I really like it :)

Reviewer: thekk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2009 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awesome. I really like the "R" line.  Great reason for Jules to leave.  (Isn't this challenge a fun thing to tackle? :])

Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2009 12:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice!!!! i like that as her reason for leaving!!!

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