Date: April 02, 2010 3:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so good! I love it! Sure it made me cry, but oh well. Great job!
Date: September 18, 2009 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have my reasons, and I held my hand over my eyes and read (don't ask how, just accept)! As always, you did a brilliant job. I like the format, the short lines - very much added to the tension. The idea of her having dreams/nightmares of what might have been is just completely heartbreaking, particularly at the end how she doesn't want to end them because it's all she has of Shawn. You took the angst to the highest degree, didn't you?! Well-written all the way around, some of your best.
Date: September 17, 2009 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was beautifully written. And I think it was pretty true to Juliet's character, too (though we'll never know for sure, because that would mean an angry mob would come after the writers of Psych with torches and pitchforks for killing off Shawn)
But yeah, as I said, very well done.