Date: April 29, 2010 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was great! I didn't notice that they were each a sentence longer till I read this. The whole thing was a smart idea, and I love how you ended it, with I feel so alive.
Great job Jenn1984
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I'm glad this shed some light on the format. This is a very personal story for me and I'm glad it received such a positive response. Thanks again.
Date: November 04, 2009 2:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude, i loved this when you wrote it.<3 The writing style is stellar and you just rock hardcore. End of story. I think you need to be kicked out of our Non Creative Club. I'm going to need that jacket back.
But wait, that would mean I was the only one in the club...Okay, so maybe I haven't thought this through. O_o
Loved getting inside your head, Jennbug. *Hugs*
Can I argue that I wrote this two years ago? I can still be in the club because I haven't really written anything in a long time, right?! I'VE WORN IN MY JACKET, I DON'T WANT TO GIVE IT UP!
Thanks for commenting, SJ <3
Date: November 04, 2009 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Alone was one of the first words I had come up with during the brainstorming session with Luna." Isn't it amazing how fics grow out of words? I've done that so many times. I just have a word or a phrase, and then all of a sudden, it keeps expanding and taking form. Quite an interesting process.
Oh, but it IS, Mo. This one grew out of a simple lyric, and this word, "alone", was the start of a really fun writing experience.
I'm really excited that you read this. I wrote it so long ago, but it's still one of my favorites, which is interesting because I usually loathe all my stuff from back then! <3
Date: November 04, 2009 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow I don't remember reading this one before... but I loved reading it and reading your commentary. Nicely done....
Thank you! ;D I wrote this story two years ago, which is probably why you don't remember it! It's been a long time. But I would recommend checking out the companion that MusicalLuna wrote to this from Shawn's PoV.
Thanks for reading this and I'm glad you enjoyed it with the commentary :)