Reviewer: marniewings Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2013 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow this is awesome! Loved it. Great job Jenn.

Reviewer: hbee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2010 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was great! I didn't notice that they were each a sentence longer till I read this. The whole thing was a smart idea, and I love how you ended it, with I feel so alive.
Great job Jenn1984

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I'm glad this shed some light on the format. This is a very personal story for me and I'm glad it received such a positive response. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Samantha Joan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2009 2:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Dude, i loved this when you wrote it.<3 The writing style is stellar and you just rock hardcore. End of story. I think you need to be kicked out of our Non Creative Club. I'm going to need that jacket back.


But wait, that would mean I was the only one in the club...Okay, so maybe I haven't thought this through. O_o 


Loved getting inside your head, Jennbug. *Hugs* 

Author's Response:

Can I argue that I wrote this two years ago? I can still be in the club because I haven't really written anything in a long time, right?! I'VE WORN IN MY JACKET, I DON'T WANT TO GIVE IT UP!

Thanks for commenting, SJ <3

Reviewer: MorganAdams Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2009 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

"Alone was one of the first words I had come up with during the brainstorming session with Luna." Isn't it amazing how fics grow out of words? I've done that so many times. I just have a word or a phrase, and then all of a sudden, it keeps expanding and taking form. Quite an interesting process.

Author's Response:

Oh, but it IS, Mo.  This one grew out of a simple lyric, and this word, "alone", was the start of a really fun writing experience.

I'm really excited that you read this.  I wrote it so long ago, but it's still one of my favorites, which is interesting because I usually loathe all my stuff from back then! <3

Reviewer: Amybf19 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2009 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow I don't remember reading this one before... but I loved reading it and reading your commentary.  Nicely done....

Author's Response:

Thank you! ;D I wrote this story two years ago, which is probably why you don't remember it!  It's been a long time.  But I would recommend checking out the companion that MusicalLuna wrote to this from Shawn's PoV. 

Thanks for reading this and I'm glad you enjoyed it with the commentary :)

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