Date: November 05, 2009 7:03 pm Title: Commentary - For Keeps
Jimmy Rodriguez = James Rodriguez/Roday ! ....perhaps? no...?
Date: November 04, 2009 2:35 pm Title: Commentary - For Keeps
Like I said before KitCat, my heart is in pieces, lol. I really don't know how I survived that scene. O_o
I love, love, love your insight into Juliet and this fic is so well written.<3 You capture her emotions, thoughts & aspirations about love & Shawn amazingly & reading your thought process made it that much more enjoyable.<3 *Hugs*
Date: November 04, 2009 11:24 am Title: Commentary - For Keeps
Wow loved hearing your voice in the fic as you talked about writing the story the way you did.... I enjoyed reading it the first time and really enjoyed reading it with your commentary with it. One thing tho is that you substituted Gus' name for Shawn's in one paragraph after meeting Shawn for the first time. I remember reading it the first time and not quite realizing initially that you meant Shawn not Gus 'cause it could have worked for Gus a little bit in the first sentence too. ;)