Date: January 12, 2010 4:15 pm Title: Contraband
Very lovely story. Just a continuous stream of awesome.
Date: December 15, 2009 10:28 pm Title: Flat-Top
Good chapter, though I really don't understand the point behind it. Nothing really happened. But, whavtever, I'm totally diggin this story. :)
Date: December 15, 2009 3:46 am Title: DI Stone
one spencer where it should have been Barback. but interesting story hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: GR! I can't believe I did that! thanks for telling me!
Date: December 14, 2009 9:45 pm Title: DI Stone
Interesting story still. You had the drill sergeant calling Shawn "Spencer" instead of "Barback", though. Looking forward to seeing how Shawn does!
Author's Response: (repeat) GR! I can't believe I did that!
Date: December 14, 2009 8:14 pm Title: DI Stone
I'm so glad you updated. I was about to die with the thought of waiting forever. I am really really hooked on this...already. Fantastic Job.
Date: December 14, 2009 7:18 pm Title: Not Real
No, you don't sound like a broken record — because if you do, then I do, because I'm just going to keep on saying how totally freaking *awesome* this fic is!! :D
Ooh, I wonder if Shawn will want to stay... oh my gosh, I have to read more!
Date: December 14, 2009 7:15 pm Title: Luck
Oh my gosh, great chapter! I can't wait to see what Shawn's going to be like during boot camp — I hope those are nice long chapters. *grin*
I'm even more excited for when he finishes! :D haha
My brother finished boot camp on November 20 this year — he's in the Navy. *grin*
I'm so excited, he's coming home for Christmas break this thursday! *big grin*
Sorry, back to the review — awesome chapter, keep up the good work! ^^
Author's Response: Cool. The Navy was gonna be my second choice for Kyle (my fictional character) branch-wow that was kind of random...=) thanks for your review.