Date: January 02, 2011 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
Okay first of all, I laughed SO HARD when you called Shawn an 'oversized man child' and second you weave an amazing story and I loved how youmake fun of the mentalist
Date: January 01, 2011 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 23
OMG this is getting interesting......
[Report This]Date: January 01, 2011 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 23
Ohh, very very interesting. First off, love the new Mary! Although she can never replace Lightly in my heart I think she'll be a good alternative. Second, love the dream sequence. Very wacky. And third, holycrapwhatshappening? I hope Shawn is okay D: He must be really out of it to actually blame Henry, if he was really awake at least.
Please update soon, I'm very excited to see what happens!
Date: January 01, 2011 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 23
Woah...definitely didn't see that coming! I've been curious from the very beginning to see what was going to happen with this mind/memory problem and it looks like we'll be getting some answers soon! Like next chapter? Please? Speaking of the next chapter...that will be up soon, right? Like tomorrow? Oh, and I love the wacky pineapple dreams! Fantastic writing! Thanks for updating!
[Report This]Date: January 01, 2011 7:26 pm Title: Chapter 23
I have to say that I love this chapter but you have definitely left it with a huge cliffhanger. I didn't see it coming (but you did set it up--foreshadow--so kudos to you for pulling it off as a definite shock!) I immediately wondered how Shawn is going to solve the case while in the hospital with a very dangerous head injury. Love the challenge you set up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: January 01, 2011 6:53 pm Title: Chapter 23
AHHHHHH LOVE IT!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
Date: January 01, 2011 2:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love your story. You are such a good writer, I also like where the story is going. I can't believe that Juliet found out! Please continue, this story is excellent.
Date: December 31, 2010 12:31 pm Title: Yang 3 with 3D's: Danger, Death, and Destruction
Seriously look forward to these chapters of yours. Loving them!! If I have to I will write a review each and very day so ic an get more chapters faster... ;) Kidding. Love that you've equated Yin/Yang to Star Wars.... and am truly enjoying the relationship develop between Shules as you write it!! Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: December 31, 2010 7:56 am Title: Yang 3 with 3D's: Danger, Death, and Destruction
and the plot thickens!!!!!
love it!!!!
update soon?!
Date: December 30, 2010 9:11 pm Title: Yang 3 with 3D's: Danger, Death, and Destruction
Ahhh! I love Star Wars!! Can't wait to read more. Update soon! :)