Reviewer: skippypeanuts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2011 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love it! This is one of my favorite cross-overs! I love the relationship you've built between them all! I hope there is more to come!

Reviewer: silverluna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2011 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOL, SO freaking true! XD

Shawn laughed. "He thinks that supernatural things have an obsession with our necks."

She arched an eyebrow but Dean spoke up, "I don't think, dude, I know. Something always tries to choke one of you."

I LOVE your description of the creepy old house:

There was one main room that they stood in now, a doorway leading to the collapsed remains of a smaller room to the right and a few more doors at the back. The house butted right up to a hill, and through one gaping doorway she could see bare dirt between the few wall slats that remained in place. Moonlight filtered through the holes in the roof, spotlighting more holes in the floor.

Seriously feel as if I'm watching an episode of Supernatural; I can even see the usual lighting and shadows for scenery like this. Very cool! 

LOL. Shawn and Dean giggling at the word "booty". XD Then launching into a whole discussion about how was the better fake pirate—LOL SWEET

Dude. O.o S.C.A.R.Y.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Her eyes squinted shut and she panted through her open mouth as the pressure in her head increased to levels that sent frissions of fear racing along all her nerves. She couldn't take much more of this. Her head literally felt like it was about to explode, despite a tiny rational part of her brain denying this was possible.

But I love it. Cold wind, banshee scream, mind blowing fear—it's  PERFECT.

Ah—loved Juliet's view of Sam standing guard over her as she lies on the ground. It seems the ghost wants poor Shawn again! Love Worried! and Angry!Dean over this. :) 

You so perfectly craft the action—the visuals are so well done and easy to "watch". I also love the suspenseful-creepy Supernatural-esque mood you create that overshadows everything—the obvious fear, sickness (at trying to become conscious after being forcibly made unconscious) and worry that Juliet has as she tries to find out what happened to Shawn. Then there are Sam and Dean, being perfectly themselves, which I so love. 

Ha! I love it! XD

She scowled in a way that would have made Lassiter proud. "No."

"Jules—"

"I said no," she repeated.

GUH. Juliet and Shawn working so hard to communicate through the door as Sam shoots ghosts in corners—priceless and scary. LOVE. 

LOL XD 

"How many times do I have to tell you, Dean?" Shawn replied. "I like girls. I like Jules, specifically."

Dean laughed and Sam rolled his eyes, but his muscles relaxed slightly too. Juliet covered her mouth to keep from giggling hysterically.

"Really? I hadn't noticed. Cover your eyes if you can. I'm gonna try and open this door."

 

OH. O.O Oh, crap.

"I mean that the dirt in the wall behind me isn't staying in the wall behind me. It's falling down on me."

The physical and emotional whumpage here is JUST SO FREAKING GOOD. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY. I seriously feel like I'm watching an episode of Supernatural, sometime in S1 or S2 when it was still really good. Dean and Sam are so themselves (I know I said it but it really bears repeating) and Juliet and Shawn are also well done. I also love the extra degree of worry and responsibility Dean feels towards Shawn, paling when he thinks about the consequences of opening the door and literally backing away from it after Shawn complains about the kicking. GREAT! And I feel like Juliet's worry comes from the sentiments "We'd Like To Thank The Academy"—that cute version of her who doesn't want her boyfriend getting killed! xD

SO SWEET SHULES AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!

"Hey," she said and he glanced up, guilt all over his features. "Why do you follow me and Carlton into potential gunfights?"

He looked away. "Because I'm an idiot?" he said with surprising sincerity.

She shook her head. "Because you worry about me. Because if something happens, you want to be there." She leaned forward and brushed a kiss against his cheek. "That's why I came with you on this hunt. And just like you don't regret following me into danger, I don't regret following you."

GREAT! LOVED!

The firelight reflected in her suspiciously damp eyes, but the tight lines around her eyes and mouth faded as she relaxed at the evidence the nightmare was over. Her eyes tracked something—he assumed Dean—and then when Dean got close enough that Shawn could see him for himself, they went back to the fire.

LOL XD AWESOME ENDING!!!! LOVED THIS, YOU ROCK!!!!! :D

 

 


Reviewer: PinappleBunny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2011 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1

I loved it! Great job! You really kept everyone in character

Reviewer: iknow Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2011 4:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hahaha I love every minute of it!

Reviewer: Vicki Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2011 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love the crossover, love both shows. Thanks for these.
Hey at least Sam and Shawn didn't get strangled :-).

Reviewer: pineapplefruitcup18 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2011 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow!!! i felt like i was watching supernatural!!! i lost interest in that show a while ago, since they kept doing the same thing episode after episode (killing demons, then demons killing them...yatta yatta). but this was really good, and shawn and juliet was a nice asset to them!! great job!! (now i kind of want to watch an episode of supernatural) ^_^

Reviewer: xpsychxssjs Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2011 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Are Dean and Sam from another show or something? Or did you just make them up, because I love them, and their character dynamics with Shawn and Jules. Also nice shules! You did an awesome job with the supernatural stuff too :) 



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