Date: December 12, 2013 1:04 am Title: Since Birth Almost
Can I begin to say AHHHHHH!?! holy MOLY I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!
Date: December 11, 2013 8:01 pm Title: Since Birth Almost
Are all your stories about either rape or cannibalism?
And is Shawn getting a little bit better, or is he just learning to hide it more?
And one more...
She was behind bars after all...
Is that foreshadowing? Please say that's not foreshadowing.
... but don't lie.
Date: December 08, 2013 3:43 pm Title: Since Birth Almost
Thanks for updating! I'm a big fan of all your stories--glad you're continuing this one!
Loved seeing Shawn and Gus interact more or less as they used to. The bits where Shawn hissed like a vampire were definitely my favorites :)
I'm sensing a calm before the storm here... can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: December 08, 2013 11:48 am Title: Since Birth Almost
I nearly died laughing at 'lost his marbles years ago'! This was a nice piece of bonding and getting back to normalcy for Shawn. But the baby is due soon and then decisions will have to be made...Thank you for this update - can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: December 07, 2013 6:18 am Title: Since Birth Almost
I am so glad you updated this story again. It's been bugging me not knowing what was happening with Shawn.
I really like the reference in here to the vampire episode. That was one of my favorites.
And I'm glad to see Shawn is on the mend. He's not better yet, but he is getting there.
As always, fantastic work.
Date: September 17, 2013 8:12 am Title: Swallowing Black Memories
Poor poor Shawn. As if being assaulted like that wasn't bad enough he has to have a child with that psycho. At least now he's finally reconnected with Jules.
I loved Henry's reaction to finding out the truth, especially after what he said to Shawn. I also liked Lassiter's reaction and how hard he's working to keep this psycho locked away. His own feelings of guilt over the situation are understandable and I liked how he was trying to comfort Shawn. Not many people really get Lassiter. Good job.
Really liking the story so far. The characters are spot on and I can tell you really care about them. Please don't leave this story unfinished.
You are an amazing writer by the way.
Date: June 23, 2013 11:15 pm Title: Reply Hazy, Try Again
Oh God, No. She's Back, Why? Shawn Just Needs to Punch Her In The Face & Run, Calling The Cops As He Does. Seriously. I Hope He Gets Away From Her.
& What He Told Henry... God Henry Should See The Half-Truth For What It Was. He Should KNOW That There's More To It Than That.