Reviewer: Checkerz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2013 10:25 pm Title: Calm in the Eye

Oohh man 0_0 Shawn....anywho glad to see youre back Drag XD

Reviewer: Redwolffclaw Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2013 12:42 am Title: Calm in the Eye

Woo hoo! A breakthrough with Jules. I feel really sorry for anyone having anything to do with that crazy lady. Great chapter as always.

Reviewer: WyldPwca3 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf star [Report This]
Date: April 07, 2013 9:34 am Title: And the Walls Fall Down

i've read through this story twice so far.  I can't wait to see how it ends!  Keep up the excellent writing!


Author's Response: Oh thank you so much!  That's awesome! Well here's the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Shea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2013 11:21 pm Title: And the Walls Fall Down

Desperate for an update. I wonder if Shawn will want anything to do with the baby when all is said and done?

Author's Response: Update is here! xD  And thank you so much for all the awesome comments!! Sorry for not answering all the questions - to be honest I don't yet have a solid decision on how this story will play out.  I DO have a couple of endings in mind though!

Reviewer: Shea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2013 9:32 pm Title: Monsters in the Closet

I KNEW IT.

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Date: March 15, 2013 8:43 pm Title: They Bury Their Dead in the Dark

Poor Shawn...

Reviewer: Shea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2013 8:34 pm Title: Swallowing Black Memories

Raped again? Shawn can't catch a break with you. You did it tastefully, though, by implying it rather than just saying it. I don't think I could have read it if it were any more graphic.

Reviewer: unobtrusivescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2013 6:00 pm Title: And the Walls Fall Down

I love the Jules and Shawn:)
They really need each other. Hopefully they can keep Rhonda away because that call was super creepy

Reviewer: fantomfaire Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2013 11:20 pm Title: And the Walls Fall Down

Just found this story and had to read it all the way thru to this point before I could stop! This is such a gripping tale! I have to say - you sure like to give Shawn all kinds of emotional whumping, don't 'cha? Love the story and I can't wait to see what happens from here! Man, put that crazy b***h in the same lock-up with Yang and see what happens. Don't think Yang would take too kindly to Rhonda hurting her Shawn. Nice twist, putting in the pregnancy. I'm really torn about whether Shawn should be a part of the child's life or not. There are excellent arguments on both sides of the fence but it will be a tough choice either way. Can't wait to see which way this goes! Please update again real soon!

Author's Response: I love all the thinking you've included in your comments! I, too, have been pondering a lot of what you've mentioned and there are going to be a ton of things addressed in the chapters to come - hopefully things that will be surprising (though good surprise or bad surprise remains to be seen, haha!). Hope you enjoy the latest chapter!

Reviewer: Redwolffclaw Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2013 11:02 am Title: And the Walls Fall Down

Sweet. Was hoping Shawn would have a breakthrough... Didn't think it would be literally though. Great chappie ending.



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