Reviewer: josh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2011 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

okay, was the mid-series finale epic, or was it epic?


Author's Response: Oh, it was epic. It still needs a second viewing but I thought Rory was amazing!

Reviewer: josh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2011 6:01 am Title: Chapter 1

doctor who. psych. can it get any better? thanks for updating!!!!

p.s. doctor who mid-series finale tonight!!

Author's Response: Can't wait! Thanks for your earlier nudge to get me to finish the chapter.

Reviewer: josh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2011 1:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

come on! when are you gonna continue this story? it's fantastic!!!!

Reviewer: hbee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2011 12:32 am Title: Chapter 10

Nice job writing Shawn; I really hear his voice in this. :D
Keep up the good work, and I'll definitely keep up the reading!

Author's Response: Yeah, Shawn was definitely more Shawn-like in this section. I think because he's now sharing what's really happening, he can be his light-hearted self.  Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: hbee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2011 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 9

Haha. Love the sea lion reference.
And woody knowing doc is epic. X)

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought Thesealion would work perfectly for the scene.

Reviewer: hbee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2011 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 8

Yay plot!
Amy knew he wasn't a psychic because she was one. ;) (Karen Gillian played a soothseer in the DW episode Fires of Pompeii)
Great story so far! :)

Author's Response: That was just because of the Pyroviles!!

Reviewer: skylucy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2011 8:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

Thank you for the quick update--you do a great job with the characters and the dialogue and I can't wait to read the next one with Shawn the Doctor and Woody--oh my! ;^)

Author's Response: Thanks! I had half this section written when I posted the last one. Word was acting up so I couldn't use it for awhile, hence the quick turnaround.

Reviewer: skylucy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2011 9:40 pm Title: Chapter 7

I got caught up (I can't believe you updated so quickly and I got behind--which made for a fantastic read.) I love the way you handle the characters and the action reads so naturally. I'm looking forward to the next steps on the trail to solving the mystery (and I really hope that Shawn gets that ride in the Tardis!)

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I think it reads naturally because I'm as much in the dark about the killer as they are! As for Shawn in the TARDIS...I think I might leave that up to a vote as the time gets closer.

Reviewer: hbee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2011 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 7

Haha. I love how you don't know the murderer yet. X) Do you now? :D
Love this! especially Shawn and doc's interactions.

Author's Response: I think I know what I want to do. I'll have to see if I can make it seem original. Thanks for your continued reviews

Reviewer: hbee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2011 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 6

Lol. 'Amy was amazed that someone talked with that many italics.'
So.... aliens killed him to stop him from publishing proof of aliens?

Author's Response:

It might be. I really haven't decided.

That line made me smile. It came to me as I looked and saw how many words I had actually italicized. Next chapter should be Lassie meeting the Doctor



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