Reviewer: Susannanass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2011 2:55 pm Title: #2 Love

Also a great chapter. Your writing style is clear and easy to read. You describe the characters and their actions on such way it seems natural and realistic.
This chapter is a good example. Keep the good work up and update!

Reviewer: Susannanass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2011 2:48 pm Title: #1 Introduction

I like the plot twist, I was pretty sure we were talking Shawn in the beginning. I like your writing style and the impression of the characters are realistic. I love it.



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