Date: September 15, 2013 6:43 pm Title: Together Again
Really good story. I loved all the action in the first chapter. It is so like Shawn to try to save someone and end up in danger himself. And I really loved the bonding moments between Lassiter and Jules in chapter 2. Perfect.
Date: July 04, 2012 9:18 am Title: Together Again
Ahh... this was great. I have that feeling in the pit of my stomach that is left when I read a fic that's in character and well written. Well done!
I hate to say it, but I think the quality of the fics on Psychfic itself is decreasing. That's why it's nice to know that authors such as yourself are still out there. I know that I don't have to "profile" the summary or scan the first few paragraphs for basic grammar errors to make sure that I have a worthwhile read on my hands.
Now, on to the comments.
I love how you write Lassie. He is very in character, and yet you're able to bring out that rarely seen soft side of his without any trouble. And Juliet... You totally had her pegged. Basically, your characterization is all around awesome.
In chapter one, I loved the distance you gave us readers from Lassie's pep talk. You seem to understand very well that sometimes less is more. It's a quality rarely seen in Fanfiction, as, frequently, Fanfiction is a tool used to unveil those hidden moments that the original, less-is-more author realized were more powerful when unseen. I guess all that to say kudos on your ability to leave words undisclosed and have us still understand the moment fully.
Additionally, you have this amazing eye for detail. You've thrown nuances in everywhere, especially concerning police work, which makes the story feel very real.
Thank you so much for writing this story and sharing it!