[Report This]Date: April 15, 2013 5:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
Congrats on the baby!! That's so exciting:)
I can't wait to figure out why the St. Claires brought Shawn out there and have him locked away! I really liked the Henry POV & POV in the previous chapters, seeing how they all work together. I think the way you wrote his thoughts fit Shawn's 'process'! Please update soon!!
Date: April 15, 2013 4:44 am Title: Chapter 7
This story is really great so far and intriguing. Really well written, I hope you find time to continue it :) Also congrats on the baby :)
Date: April 15, 2013 4:43 am Title: Chapter 7
This story is really great so far and intriguing. Really well written, I hope you find time to continue it :) Also congrats on the baby :)
[Report This]Date: April 13, 2013 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Congratulations on the baby!! That's truly awesome and easily the best excuse for not updating that I've ever heard!!
It was a huge blast of excitement to see this update and I forced myself to hold off reading until there were absolutely no distractions!! (which ended up being about 3am lol!)
It's crazy ominous how you've written Shawn in his current "environment"! it has this surface luxury of a soft bed and even games to play - but then there's the suggestion of "he's got it better than other" and we realize he isn't the first and/or only prisoner. And the fact that this was all planned besides!! GUUUUH!! I've got all sorts of imaginings about what it means and my heart is thudding about what will happen! Especially knowing that this opulant bedroom is only his first stop, and that he ends up somewhere far more frightening and dark.
I'm just so happy to see you updating again! Thank you so much for this amazing chapter!!
[Report This]Date: April 13, 2013 7:26 am Title: Chapter 7
I did a double take when I noticed the email telling me you'd updated, and was so estactic that I read the entire chapter on my cellphone instead of waiting to get home--Sorry to hear that RL has been so crazy, though it's definitely crazy in a happy and great way and here's to hoping you get a chance to update your stories on a semi regular basis...any of your stories (still hoping that HH 2 will get finished someday) :)
Date: April 11, 2013 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
Another brilliant chapter! I really enjoyed it
Date: April 11, 2013 11:51 am Title: Chapter 6
Oooh. Can't wait to read more!
Date: April 11, 2013 11:45 am Title: Chapter 5
oh God. I hope shawn doesn't die. Noo! I hope Henry can find him again.
Date: April 11, 2013 11:37 am Title: Chapter 4
LOL I love the retort after Shawn says go to hell. Brilliant.
Date: April 11, 2013 11:25 am Title: Chapter 3
Ooh I hope Henry can figure things out! I hope Shawn will be alright. But knowing Shawn he'll be alright...