Reviewer: silverluna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2011 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

GAHHHHHH!!!!!! *FLAILING* Another awesome chapter!!!!! :D I really enjoy your writing style—these great snappy minimalistic descriptives that sort of happen after the fact:


“Huh,” Shawn said, looking out the window. “Welcome to Mayberry.”

“My favorite shirt!”

“Well don’t get yourself held hostage and you won’t have to worry about that again,” Lassiter snapped. “Besides, you’ve had that shirt for at least four years.”

“Apple Jacks are a classic, Lassieface!”

It's like with just a few words we get instant imagery of what the town looks like, or we get cute flashbacks to Season 1 (it was 1, right??) with Shawn's Apple Jacks shirt—and that he was wearing it the whole time but it wasn't in need of comment until the right moment. ;) Awesome! 

Lassiter's plan to dump Shawn at a bus station is a good one—but, as Shawn does point out, you can lead a horse to water, but can you make him drink? (Or Shawn would probably say, You can lead a horse to water, but you're going to end up stuck holding the bag. LOL Okay, I'll stop trying to be Shawn's humor now. xD) (Though, I suddenly can't get the image of Lassiter forcing Shawn's head in a puddle of water to make him drink.) xD Lol Sorry, tangent! xD

I loved Lassiter going into instant cop mode at the gas pump—spotting the criminal to be and taking immediate action. My hero! :) And I loved that the robber of course goes right up to Shawn and uses him as a shield, so priceless! Poor Shawn can't even get breakfast at an out of town diner without getting himself into a hostage situation!!! XD LOL. So cool! 

I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED the entire sequence/banter between Lassiter, Hector and Shawn—G.A.W.D. LOVED IT!!!!! It was all so hilarious and both Shawn and Lassiter were perfectly themselves—Shawn, at ease, mouthing off and dragging Lassiter into the whole mess while Lassiter keeps a perfectly steady hand and his trademark glare-at-Shawn-and/or-bad-guys all while making Hector very confused and uncomfortable. And YAY, Shawn whump!!!! 

And I totally loved that Shawn was totally traumatized—because Hector's blood got on his favorite shirt! Ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!

And Lassie saved the day!!!! YAY!!!!! :D

This is such a fun story! I can't wait to see what adventure/misadventure these two get into next chapter!!! :D

 



Author's Response: :D Your reviews are always an amazing treat!! Thank you so much; I'm very glad you're liking it. I shall try to get another chapter done as soon as I can ... which will hopefully be sooner rather than later.

Reviewer: silverluna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2011 8:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this!!!!! I finally got a chance to read it and I have to say, I was hooked immediately!!! What a wonderful look into Lassiter being ordered to relax and actually (trying) to make good use of his time! I thoroughly enjoyed all the little details: Lassie deciding to get as far away from Shawn as possible, Lassie bemoaning leaving his "beloved Crown Vic behind", Lassie instructing his neighbors not to touch his car while he's gone! (LOL), Lassie renting the RV and planning to hit some good fishing spots, which no specific destination in mind. I really love that, that as reluctant as Lassiter is to leave ( There was no annoying psychic in sight, and with the entire open road ahead of him, Lassiter was starting to understand how others could enjoy this. Not that being at the station wouldn’t be a better use of his time, but if he had to be away, this was the way to do things. ) he starts to get into the idea of peace and quiet and, gasp, relaxation!

I actually felt bad for him because I knew that idea wasn't going to last! XD

GAH!!!! It was so AWESOME when Lassie opened the door to the camper and found Shawn there that the very first thing Lassie said was  “Spencer, get your feet off my table." XD As if Shawn is incapable of shocking Lassiter anymore. xD LOL 

Shawn's reasoning for wanting to "go on vacation" with Lassie were too funny!!! He should know he's not fooling anyone with his too innocent act! ;) I could totally see why he'd tag along, especially if Gus was out of town—not only is it a fun opportunity to annoy Lassie in the great outdoors, but there's also the fact that Shawn gets lonely when he's all by himself. He likes people—even if they don't like him back. ;) Lol  

Awesome first chapter! Again, I feel so bad for poor Lassiter, who almost got to enjoy an alone time vacation! LOL XD



Author's Response: Hehe Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: beccaundomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2011 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 2

Not the Apple Jacks shirt! ;) I'm loving the banter between Shawn and Lassie. Hilarious!

Author's Response: lol I know, right? Haha, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: beccaundomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2011 1:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Haha! Poor Lassie. This is gonna be awesome, I can tell! :)


Author's Response: I know, right? *pats him* :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ZedPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2011 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Heheheheh, oh Shawn, when will you learn that Lassie wants to be alone? Oh yes, that's right... NEVER!

*smishes Deej* Thanks for the birthday fic! I love this plot idea and I know it's been floating around in your head for a while :-P

Author's Response: Hehehe Thank you. I'm glad you like it! :)



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