Date: December 19, 2011 7:04 pm Title: This Chapter Sucks
OMG I LOVE THIS!!!! THANK YOU!!!! HOW AWESOME!!!!!
This was so perfect! More whump, severe disorientation, fainting ("the f-word" LOL), Juliet to the rescue and even a Shawn freak out! XD
I laughed so hard at this:
O'Hara gave him a look, clearly unconvinced. “Shawn, you were shaking him and yelling hysterically. You kept saying, 'I don't know what to do! Is he dead? Oh my god, is he dead, Jules?'”
The creases that only appeared when she was really worried had gathered around her eyes, between her eyebrows. Carlton waved a hand and glanced away. “I've been building up a resistance to chloroform. It was no big deal.”
He left out the cold feeling of fear he'd gotten when he'd realized he was at the mercy of that shaggy-haired blood-spewing lunatic. Carlton allowed a brief glance of gratitude and got a sliver of a smile out of O'Hara for his trouble. The lines started to soften again.
Perfect little partner moment, sweet and quick and just for their knowledge only. :)
I loved loved loved loved loved loved your awesome descriptions of Lassiter trying to fight the dizziness and disorientation of the chloroform and nearly two pints blood loss! And then this:
“Whoa, whoa,” Shawn said, apparently unperturbed by whoever had been speaking. He moved to catch Carlton's limp form and then Carlton had his face pressed into the shoulder of Spencer's coat. He smelled like hair product and citrus. Dimly, Carlton realized he could feel the vibrations of Spencer's voice, but all he could make out was a steady ringing that was just getting louder and louder.
If he didn't know any better he was about to—
Perfect description! So awesome!!!!
Thanks so much for writing this, you rock! :D LOVED IT!!!!!!
Oh god, thank you so much. *crushes with hug*