Date: January 19, 2012 5:38 pm Title: Time is Gone
I can't imagine what Henry must've gone through when the arrest happened D:
Please update soon! I'm so in love with your fic!
Author's Response: I would assume there'd be a lot of yelling and swearing and panic :) Hehehe. Thank you! The fact that you're enjoying it will be the reason I write the next chapter :D
[Report This]Date: January 19, 2012 4:55 pm Title: Time is Gone
I actually started to cry just wanted to add that in to my other review lol thisa is one of the bedt chps I have read so far love the shawn henry talk very henry like!! Want more please!!
Author's Response: Thrilled to know that I kept him in character, thanks! There will be more soon :)
Date: January 19, 2012 10:15 am Title: Time is Gone
Noooooo! Keep fighting Shawn!!! The emotions are so real in this story that I almost found myself praying for Shawn to be okay. :P
Author's Response: It's great to know I was able to convey the emotions that well! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 19, 2012 8:31 am Title: Time is Gone
I loved this chapter!! Keep updating!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: January 19, 2012 6:41 am Title: Time is Gone
First off I want to say I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. I can't wait to find out who the bad guy is and I can't wait to see how you fix Shawn.
I would like to point out that in the last chapter you said 'Looking down at Shawn, prone in the hospital bed' Prone position would be if they were lying on their stomach. Supine position would be if they were lying on their back, which is the way you describe Shawn.
Also I'm a little confused about the blood pressure 31. Usually blood pressures are measured by 2 sets of numbers. Systolic and diastolic, sysyolic being the higher number and diastolic being the lower number. i.e. 120/80. I'm assuming you are refering to the daistolic number?
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to write some feedback, Krystalrain! The grammatical error has been fixed, and regarding the blood pressure, yes it is referring to the diastolic number, which holds higher importance in company with heart rate and blood circulation than the systolic numbers This is what doctors worry most about when patients BP is too low. Again, thanks for reading - more to come soon! :)
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[Report This]Date: January 19, 2012 12:54 am Title: 13 minutes
Loved it amazing
Date: January 18, 2012 9:23 pm Title: Time is Gone
I can't possibly see how Shawn can live after this, I hope it doesn't turn out to be one of those miraculous, he was definitely going to die but he suddenly got better kind of deals.
Author's Response: Well I won't lie - I don't plan on killing him. But I also don't want a miraculous recovery either. :)
Date: January 18, 2012 3:55 pm Title: Lose innocence. Find hope.
Nicely written so far. I like moments that you stretch out... those moments that usually happen in a blink of an eye, but are slowed to provide suspense. I look forward to the conclusion!
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know what you enjoy in the fic! :)
Date: January 16, 2012 7:57 am Title: Lose innocence. Find hope.
OHHHHH MMMM GEEEEE! Haha you just keep making it more and more intense!!! I love Gus's quote from his mom. I can't wait to see Jules's reaction to going in to see shawn, obvs she would like breakdown. I would :( And you did a really good job with explaining the affect all of the medical stuff on Shawn had on Gus, my grandfather got in a car accident last year and it was a pretty similar outcome, he had the machines, the ventilator, all of that stuff, but he ended up passing away :/ I have faith in Shawn though!!(:
Author's Response: :D Thank you! Awesome review is awesome :) And Jules time with Shawn is something I have planned just for you and the rest of the Shules fans. It'll be a couple more chapters until it happens (Carlton gets guilt-ridden next, hehe) but it's totally worth the wait.
Date: January 14, 2012 5:01 pm Title: Lose innocence. Find hope.
Oh. OH, that was beautiful. That scene with Gus was just ... *sniff* The fist bump! Gah, the fist bump! This story kills me with its greatness!
Author's Response: Gosh, thank you! Your feedback means the world!