Date: June 10, 2012 9:22 pm Title: SBPD - Sicced By Police Detective
I think shawn is in character and funny and you totally pegged Lassiefras ;)
also in regards to your comment at the top of the chapter, apparently people are doubting your realism? not sure what that meant but I hope no one is being mean to you, not cool. I can't wait to see where you go with this story :)
Date: April 29, 2012 5:41 pm Title: SBPD - Sicced By Police Detective
I thought Lassie came out as a bit harsh. I think, though he finds Spencer to be a pest, that he would care and show a little concern when it comes to Spencer, and if not for Spencer, at least for his partner O'Hara. Besides that, I like to see where this is going. Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm hoping to rectify/explain why Lassie was being so harsh. Mainly because that was what I was thinking when I was asking about my characterisation. Glad that it hasn't put you off reading the story. :)
Author's Response: I'm hoping to rectify/explain why Lassie was being so harsh. Mainly because that was what I was thinking when I was asking about my characterisation. Glad that it hasn't put you off reading the story. :)
Date: April 29, 2012 5:09 pm Title: SBPD - Sicced By Police Detective
Omg, update today! I wanna know how Henry is. Poor papa bear :( lassie seemed kinda mean to me but that was probably just me. I bet Shawn is gonna be all protective of the old man now. Heck if someone had shot my pops i'd wanna kill him too. Poor Shawnie
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm the one writing the story and I was worried I was making Lassie too mean. That's kind of why I asked the question. Anywho, I'm anticipating the Henry bit too, can't wait to see reader's reactions. :)
Date: April 29, 2012 11:53 am Title: SBPD - Sicced By Police Detective
I LOVE where you’re going with the story so plz update faster!!!! :D And if u do take a long time to update, i won’t explode like last time cuz i know a couple of psych spoilers for season 7. (i swear i tried not to read it, but it was a copy of some of the freaking scripts. It was literally calling my name. XD) Anyways, to end my rambling, you’re an AWESOME writer, and update faster. :D
P.S. You’re doing fine with the characterization. I can so imagine the characters behaving like that. J
Author's Response: Haha, for the first time ever for psych, I also looked at those spoilers. I just NEEDED to know. :D Thank you for your review. The next chapter is in the works, I'm looking forward to it as much as you. I'm glad you think the characters are behaving normally. :)
Date: April 29, 2012 11:03 am Title: SBPD - Sicced By Police Detective
I like you characerization. Of course we can only speculate how they would act in the situation we put them. So even if they are the teeniest bit OOC, it's okay.
Author's Response: Thanks. That makes me feel a little more at ease. :)