Date: April 28, 2013 1:52 pm Title: THIRTY... Ish and PSA
Omg I just found this and read the whole thing in a few hours! Please please finish! It's awesome
Date: March 12, 2013 6:06 pm Title: TEN: Complicating competency
I was going to wait 'till the end to review because captcha's never liked me, but I can't anymore. This is so good, it's very well-written and I'm just going to spend the rest of my day reading this! I loved how you incorprated some aspects like the shooting range and undercover!Lassie into the story (from what I read from your A/N's so far anyways) even if it means reworking the storyline. That's awfully nice of you ;u;! I'll be my thorough in my next review! Just have to say love the story so far!
[Report This]Date: December 12, 2012 3:48 am Title: THIRTY... Ish and PSA
If anyone knows about blocks and life getting in the way of your passions it's me. I have a fanfiction or two and dozens of original fictions just waiting on that big wall of writer's block to tumble down. Anyway, I have truly enjoyed reading this story so far. In fact, I think this may be my second read through and it was nice to see a new chapter (or preview of one). I'm glad you have been able to continue. I look forward to embarking on Shawn and Juliet's new adventure. I'll keep checking back. Btw, you're a pretty amazing artist as well.
[Report This]Date: December 03, 2012 10:49 pm Title: TEN: Complicating competency
I really love this story and your take on this universe. Awesome storytelling.
[Report This]Date: November 07, 2012 1:45 pm Title: FIFTEEN: Say hello to my little test
Love the reference to your other story about the water fight. Read it a few days ago. Can't wait to read about Shawn's testing!
Date: November 06, 2012 9:46 pm Title: NINE: It's a wonderful lie
Ok, i put it off for 9 chapters but I have to review. Love the interactions between cop Shawn and Lassie. So fun.
Date: November 05, 2012 10:04 pm Title: TWENTY SIX: Exigent estrangement
I love the reference to Common Law! Too bad it won't be back for a new season! This is such a great story - I can't wait to read the rest!
Date: November 05, 2012 12:07 am Title: TWO: Retrospective regurgitations
I love the interaction between Shawn and his father! I love that this is definitely season 6 or post season 6 and includes the fact that they have become closer (and that he is with Jules!) Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update again soon!
Date: November 04, 2012 11:18 pm Title: ONE: The secret behind the secret
Wow what a great opening! I can't wait to read the rest of this one!
Date: November 04, 2012 8:02 am Title: THIRTY... Ish and PSA
Hey there!
So wow. I just spent half a day putting off homework 'cuz I was reading this. This is pretty amazing! I enjoy Karen's place in the whole story, she usually doesn't have the feel that she has now, where she's actually their good friend rather than their boss. And Lassie... now there's a hard character to write. Good job on his part!
I totally got you on the life thing, which is why I'm posting this review. Can't say I completely understand yours, but mine is pretty busy, and I haven't been able to write in a couple months or so. Sucks, right? It's driving me crazy. I literally get a random plot idea in, say, choir, but never have time to write them down... sigh.
I'll keep checking on this story, see if you've updated. I'd really like to see how this finishes, it's really well written. Update soon!