Reviewer: Koohii Kappu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2017 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

I can't stop crying.

I listened to the song while I read and I just . . . I dunno, I guess I just broke. Oh my god, I just can't. Suffice to say that it was amazing - y'know, one of those stories you can't help but love to hate because it was almost TOO good. You're gonna break all the humans if you keep writing stories like this. XD

Also, I love that this is the ending. You didn't go into everything that came after - which was good, really. It wasn't about what came after. It was about Shawn and what he was willing to do. So, even though I'm sufficiently heartbroken now, thank you for that.

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Date: October 27, 2016 2:15 am Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Mel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2014 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay just saying that I love this and I love that song. Please keep writing YWHOAOU and the 100 shots!!

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Date: July 25, 2014 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: RhondaB Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2014 6:04 am Title: Chapter 1

I thought this story was great, as is all of your stories, and the story by Tealcisthebomb really picked up your challenge.  I miss having her on this site and hope she eventually completes "And If Only I Could Make A Deal With God" because it is a fantastic and she is a great author (I can't get to her site on this computer so I'll have to wait until I get home to comment on her FF site).  Hopefuly everything is OK with her and I hope she is getting a lot of encouragement to continue writing because I love all her work.  KEEP WRITING AND I"LL KEEP ENJOYING!!!

Reviewer: SillyJilly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24, 2012 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1

Again with the tears! This is so freaking amazing/horrible (in a heartbreaking way). I love how you included how Shawn's whole demeanor was entirely different than usual, and I really just love these.

Reviewer: unobtrusivescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2012 11:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Super intense!!! Poor Gus:( I can't wait to check out responses to see what happens!

Reviewer: Genie93e Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28, 2012 12:21 am Title: Chapter 1

When a story is this good, it cant be stopped!!!! You ma'am cant just type something as awesome as this and then announce that "there's no more." My squid (that's right, squid) woman, how can you torture your readers like that!!! HAVE A HEART DAMMIT!!!! XD Okay now that I'm done "reprimanding" you, let me be serious and say that this story was so awesome that even my usual awesomeness couldn't handle the awesomeness of this awesome story. And you DEFINITELY should become a professional writer, because you definitely have the potential for it. :D

Reviewer: kalvinanne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2012 6:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

heya so I loved this story, honestly it was so amazing and so well written and I am pretty sure that i reviewed this on fanfic .net hahah, but I thought id review here too lol. 

Kay hoenstly this story is one of my most favorite that I have ever read, I wish there were more fics about hims havign Gus's back I think he would totally do something this dumb!!!  and I love how he made the bad guy gain respect for him.  That was super great.  I would love to see you write a sequel although I read the other sequel and was like oh my freaking goodness write me more hahahah.  but geez, epic, just epic :)

Author's Response:

lol! That's alright.

Oh my, thank you so much! I agree, there should be. There ARE a couple of challenges of along the lines of what would Shawn do if something happened to Gus (which reminds me I need to double check and see if this fits for them...) so you might want to try there. But yes, Shawn would be this dumb, that's why we love him. :D And thanks for noticing that Breskovic respected him at the end, it's an important point for if I ever wrote a sequel.

XD Jo-Lyn would be happy to hear that. Maybe I'll consider it after Seven Devils is done. But for the meantime, it'll have to wait.

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: DTS Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2012 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

There's more than one version? Wow. I only know Kate Bush. I guess I should listen to the others, give a fair chance.

Author's Response: Yep, most people are familiar with the Placebo version.

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