Date: May 31, 2012 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesomeness took the words right out of my mouth. This is how you end it????? Fellow Psych-O's unite and tell Vindi she must continue.
Author's Response: lol! THANK YOU, Belle! Yep, that's the end. There is a small possibility I might continue it someday, but I don't really have much of an idea for a plot. The only things I came up with kinda borrowed heavily from one of my other WIPs, so *shrug* 'Tis all you get for now :)
Date: May 31, 2012 9:24 am Title: Chapter 1
WHAT. THE. F!!!!!
I was like ooohhh! she has started another story and it's going to epic!!! Then I saw it was done and I was like, ok still going to be cool.
Then I read it and damn near cried!!!!
What. The. F!!!!!!
You touch on so much in just one little shot it's so not fair!! You show badass Shawn. Beaten, worried, angry, and true till the end Gus. And in a round about way worried Jules.
And then you end it!!!
With Shawn getting knocked out!!!
Well in my version Shawn goes all STASITD on them and get's away.
Only to be caught again.
Yes I know I sick but I like to think of Lassie and Jules, along with Henry and a pissed off Gus, going all rogue and finding Shawn near death.
And then doing something completely illegal and against all their morals.
You decide what that is and then think how you could potentially turn this into more than a one shot.
Just a thought.
And meh on the banner. Are you KIDDING me!! It was awesome and how you tied that little pineapple into the story, EVEN MORE AWESOMENESS.
Vindi I am jealous of your writing. (There I said it!!) And I think it's completely amazing that you write for us Psych-o's.
Author's Response:
AIMG... do you realize I do a happy little jig in my mind when I see your reviews? Well I do, because they are both awesome... and hilarious. :)
I actually really like your ending for this story, it's way different than I originally thought of and more awesome, I think. I kinda wonder if I should open it up as a challenge for people to write their own version of what happens afterwards. Hmmm... that would be really cool.... :)
Aww! Thank you for liking the banner! Yeah, the pineapple was one of my favorite bits, I just had trouble making the banner gel, so I'm glad it worked out. And omg, THANK YOU! That's just... wow... what a compliment. I'm blushing! Just... THANK YOU! And I live to serve my fellow Psych-o's! :)
(Now I REALLY want to write! Damn AIMG, your reviews always motivate me so much! lol!)
Date: May 31, 2012 7:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, my gosh...
That was so sad, but so, SO good!!
But heck! Of course Shawn lives, right? :D
..
Right?!? D:
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Hmmmm.... It's a secret! What do you think? Does he live?
Date: May 31, 2012 7:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Dude. DUDE. I imagined a scene with crossroad demons too! I imagined two actually. I may even write them for a new series I'm working on.
Also, I KNOW THAT SONG! There's an awesome Psych vid with it! <33 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nMGkWLytzuY
There's also a Within Temptation version but I prefer this beautiful verison which I heard in Warehouse 13! :P
As for your story, THAT WAS DAMN DEPRESSING!! I could feel my throat close up reading through it!
Keep up the work! :D
Author's Response:
Uzu, my dear, you are my brain twin on this one. TOTALLY. :D I really wanna see your crossroads demon scene(s)! And Warehouse 13! I bawled my eyes out when he died! That video is fantastic. :)
Thank you, thank you! *BOWS* I aim to depress :)
Date: May 31, 2012 3:33 am Title: Chapter 1
wow =) i'm amazed at how great your writing is. that was awesome! and so full of angst and shawn is such a hero.wow. but i wouldn't mind to read more of it ;D
Author's Response: Oh my, THANK YOU! It really is angsty, isn't it? Maybe one of these days I'll write a sequel or prequel or something-quel. :) We shall see...
Date: May 31, 2012 2:00 am Title: Chapter 1
And just when I think you can't do anything else to shock me senseless....you do! =D And I mean that in the nicest possible way; although it takes ALOT to bring me to tears, you managed to do it with both the story and in the inspiration song.
But this was an extremely gripping, very heart wrenching, and very uplifting story all at the same time. To have that kind of devotion and closeness with someone to be willing to do such a thing to save, not only him, but everyone else who means something to you really says something. And this scene gave me chills to boot...since we know just how quickly and with how much conviction Shawn does anything in life.
But as for the ending, gotta hold out some hope for the future, not sure where exactly I think this one will end.
Author's Response:
AWW! THANK YOU Amy! I had forgotten until just now that I bawled my butt off while writing this originally, so I guess that makes two of us? :)
Wow oh wow, what a review... I'm speechless. Wow. Just... thank you.