



[Report This]Date: February 23, 2016 7:10 am Title: Chapter 18
Really enjoyed the series. I thought you captured the personalities of the characters from both shows. It was neat having the SBPD folks aware of what's out there, especially Lassiter. I can't wait to find out exactly why Alan thinks so much of Shawn. It would be interesting to add Rory in the mix or at least have him meet Shawn at some point.
Date: January 17, 2013 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 18
Yea! Can't wait for the continuation!
Date: November 16, 2012 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oooh that was amazing. Can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: Glad you liked. Amy kinda gave me a bit of trouble and was the cause of the delay. The next section is Shawn's POV and will handle the police side of things and what happens to Hoffman




[Report This]Date: October 03, 2012 5:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Going thru serious amy and rory withdrawal. So thanks! Nice chap.




[Report This]Date: September 11, 2012 7:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
and now you've brought back captain jack. AWESOME!
Author's Response: I'll respond to both here. I'm glad you like the return of Alan and Jack was not planned originally. I came up with my villan's motivation and there he was. I've gotten the nexxt few sections typed up and noturbaby is looking them over for me so I'll post when I can.




[Report This]Date: September 11, 2012 7:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
i should probably comment seeing as how i've read all of this series thus far. really enjoyed the last one, and enjoying this one as well. love seeing alan back!
Date: August 17, 2012 1:05 am Title: Chapter 3
Omg amazing!! please update soon!
Author's Response: Gosh, aren't you the faithful reader! Thanks so much for reviewing each chapter.
Date: August 17, 2012 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL. Brilliant! onto the next chapter!
Date: August 13, 2012 3:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
yay! you continued this story!
Author's Response: Wow! You were quick! Yeah, right now I've got about 8000 words typed up. I scribble in a notebook while I'm at work so I need to type up some more.




[Report This]Date: June 12, 2012 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really Amazing! Please continue! can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I actually have even thought I intended to work on other unfinished works. I don't know when I'll get to posting. Thanks for the encouragement!