Date: September 01, 2013 12:22 am Title: Chapter 8
Apparently it's been over a year since you last updated... which is very unfortunate and disappointing because this has been a fantastic read. I guess I missed the fact that it wasn't marked as finished... Sigh. Please come back and update! I love the idea!
Date: January 16, 2013 3:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh gosh, Henry is right, something is seriously wrong! He can't remember:(
Please update soon, I want to learn more about what happened! What are the detectives and Chief say when they realize he doesn't recall?
Date: September 21, 2012 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
AAAAH great story so far! Please update soon!! :)
Date: September 01, 2012 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
Holy flip your story is amazing!! This is such a fresh, clever, and unique way of telling a memory loss-type story! It keeps you in a sort of confused suspense along with Shawn while the pieces as to what’s going on develop. Very much like the film the title’s based off, you’ve done a great job in sort of making this compelling journey for the reader to go into while we figure out what’s going to happen. And very much like the film, we don’t know when his memory will jump around, or in Shawn’s case… just disappear; so it’s all feels slightly “unstable.” Gahh… It’s just good. I like it a lot. Please update soon!! :D
Author's Response: WOW! Thanks a million! I'm so glad that you like this story, it only encourages me to write more when I see such grool reviews =D Working on the next chapter between classwork so I hope to get it updated soon! yay!
Date: August 31, 2012 5:16 pm Title: Chapter 8
Please please please finish
yes yes yes I will =) I never gave myself a chapter limit but I do know (generally) how I'd like to end it.
Date: August 29, 2012 6:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love this story! Its so...dramatic and...I feel so confused. so very very confused.
Author's Response: muahahahaha, your confusion will be diluted soon, thanks for the review =)
Date: August 26, 2012 9:04 am Title: Chapter 8
I really like your story. I'm enjoying the twist you've put on the amnesia plot point. Even though you say this is your first time writing, I feel like I'm reading a story written by a seasoned writer. I'm really enjoying this story and I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you!!!!!!!!! That's so nice of you to say, really =) I love run of the mill amnesia/accident fics so when I saw this challenge I knew I had to do it, so glad you like it!
Date: August 24, 2012 9:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
I really loved the Shawn and Gus moments and I have to admit that I'm very, very curious to know what exactly is wrong with Shawn. Please update quickly!
Author's Response: thank you! yepp the next chapter will be very revealing.. muahahha =) (and not evil) =)