Date: September 02, 2014 9:32 am Title: Chapter 9
Great story! I was so excited to see that it was updated again! Please add another chapter soon!
Date: July 23, 2014 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 9
Its good. When is the new one gonna be up
Date: September 01, 2013 12:22 am Title: Chapter 8
Apparently it's been over a year since you last updated... which is very unfortunate and disappointing because this has been a fantastic read. I guess I missed the fact that it wasn't marked as finished... Sigh. Please come back and update! I love the idea!
Author's Response: nooooooooo!!! So sorry to disappoint =( but I am here to update =) rejoice my friend!! let me know what you think =)
Date: January 16, 2013 3:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh gosh, Henry is right, something is seriously wrong! He can't remember:(
Please update soon, I want to learn more about what happened! What are the detectives and Chief say when they realize he doesn't recall?
Author's Response: Updated my friend!!! The next few chapter after chapter 9 will deal with the rest of the crew and a definite answer... but a definite solution...? idk... =)
Date: September 21, 2012 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
AAAAH great story so far! Please update soon!! :)
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! boom, updated =)
Date: September 01, 2012 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
Holy flip your story is amazing!! This is such a fresh, clever, and unique way of telling a memory loss-type story! It keeps you in a sort of confused suspense along with Shawn while the pieces as to what’s going on develop. Very much like the film the title’s based off, you’ve done a great job in sort of making this compelling journey for the reader to go into while we figure out what’s going to happen. And very much like the film, we don’t know when his memory will jump around, or in Shawn’s case… just disappear; so it’s all feels slightly “unstable.” Gahh… It’s just good. I like it a lot. Please update soon!! :D
Author's Response: WOW! Thanks a million! I'm so glad that you like this story, it only encourages me to write more when I see such grool reviews =D Working on the next chapter between classwork so I hope to get it updated soon! yay!