Reviewer: SophieG Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2012 7:14 pm Title: Reality Sets In

Wow - spooky! I would say this explains the whispering pretty well. Is there more? After this twist I would love to see more ... please update if so! 

Author's Response: If I remember correctly, there is a third chapter. But this is my first Psychfic and very short. So the third I believe is the final chapter. I put this on anoter website before and someone commented saying to continue...I would like to IF I even had a single direction to go with it. Ya know? Oh well. Some stories are better left short.

Reviewer: Afatcat101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2012 4:30 pm Title: We Work Well Together

Thanks for the advice. Yeah I wrote this when I didn't know or care much about specifics. Ya know? But the whispering thing can easily be explained in a later chapter. Or the last one

Reviewer: Checkerz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2012 3:41 pm Title: We Work Well Together

Well, it looks like sombody has to face up to their fears :) I was a little confused because Yin only chooses the VERY best as his opponents. And Shawn does fall under that catagory. But I completly understand if that had the serial killer tired of losing ;) It was really cool and suspenseful but just a tip for the future: Near explosion victims can't even hear people yell through all the ringing. Much less being whispered too :)

Reviewer: marniewings Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2012 10:15 am Title: We Work Well Together

awww poor juliet. please update soon can't wait to read more!



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