[Report This]Date: July 19, 2012 7:14 pm Title: Reality Sets In
Wow - spooky! I would say this explains the whispering pretty well. Is there more? After this twist I would love to see more ... please update if so!
Author's Response: If I remember correctly, there is a third chapter. But this is my first Psychfic and very short. So the third I believe is the final chapter. I put this on anoter website before and someone commented saying to continue...I would like to IF I even had a single direction to go with it. Ya know? Oh well. Some stories are better left short.
Date: July 15, 2012 4:30 pm Title: We Work Well Together
Thanks for the advice. Yeah I wrote this when I didn't know or care much about specifics. Ya know? But the whispering thing can easily be explained in a later chapter. Or the last one
[Report This]Date: July 15, 2012 3:41 pm Title: We Work Well Together
Well, it looks like sombody has to face up to their fears :) I was a little confused because Yin only chooses the VERY best as his opponents. And Shawn does fall under that catagory. But I completly understand if that had the serial killer tired of losing ;) It was really cool and suspenseful but just a tip for the future: Near explosion victims can't even hear people yell through all the ringing. Much less being whispered too :)
Date: July 15, 2012 10:15 am Title: We Work Well Together
awww poor juliet. please update soon can't wait to read more!