Date: January 13, 2013 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
I just discovered your fic and I really enjoy it ! Keep updating and keep writing you're talented!
Date: August 24, 2012 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is so good! Considering the subject matter for characters that are usually seen in light-hearted and fun situations, you are really keeping them amazingly in character. Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
Date: August 18, 2012 9:39 am Title: Chapter 6
Okay I take my last comment back. Nice detail in the final chapters. Good thought process. That's what I was hoping for.
I agree with everyone; that part with Wendy is very touching. And the scene with lassie and Shawn is well written. I love the very last sentence with Shawn's dialogue. It takes a ton of strength and and boat loa of pain and fear to have someone like shawn completely drop their normal facade in front of someone, especially someone who shares the same I-bug-you-you-hate-me relationship as Shawn and lassie do.
Great job. I like it. I'm gonba be checking on a daily basis for a new chapter.