Reviewer: Emily Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2014 9:36 am Title: What you don't know, can hurt you the most.

Please! Please! Please! Update this story! It's wonder.ful

Reviewer: MamaAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2014 10:39 pm Title: If at first you don't succeed...

Wow! This story totally mesmerized me. Any chance you would finish it? I hope so!

Reviewer: me Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf star [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2014 5:26 pm Title: If at first you don't succeed...

Just found this story and I think that it is really great.

I would love to read more if you ever end up finishing it.

Reviewer: livia_lectrix Signed starstarstarstarhalf star [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2013 6:14 pm Title: What you don't know, can hurt you the most.

Dude I am loving this!! You're pacing it wonderfully and your characterization of Shawn is super compelling (love me some traumatized!Shawn... and badass!Shawn is IMMINENT I love it)! :)

Reviewer: TellNearaToWrite Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12, 2013 1:43 pm Title: What you don't know, can hurt you the most.

This is fantastic and I just love it! You're pacing it perfectly, with a wonderful balance between action and introspection. Suffice to say, I'm glad to be reading!

Reviewer: insert56 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2013 6:13 am Title: If at first you don't succeed...

Sooo I started this story the other day failing to realize it wasn't completed with it. It toom me about two-three days to read it (im very busy) but when i came to the end i just about flipped out! I need more!!! Please update soon!

Reviewer: WallFlower Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2013 6:25 pm Title: If at first you don't succeed...

Woohoo! Shawn's going after him!

Which is also a grave mistake, of course, but still...

Shawn to the rescue!! :)

Reviewer: GirlFromBlackMountain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2013 1:53 pm Title: What you don't know, can hurt you the most.

Great Story!  Just started reading it today.  I read it all you have written and can not wait for you to finish.  Very good writing

Reviewer: moondragon23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2013 10:19 am Title: If at first you don't succeed...

Nice twist with adding in an accomplice. 

This guy is a real bastard and I can't blame Shawn for wanting to take him out. I just don't want him getting hurt in the process either. I can't imagine how hard this whole thing must be for him.

I like how most of this was from Henry's POV. The outside look into what Shawn is thinking and doing was perfect and really lead to the intensity of the scene when they figured out what his game plan is.

Really great job.

Reviewer: fantomfaire Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2013 1:36 am Title: If at first you don't succeed...

Oh man! I was getting the feeling that Shawn was gonna try to go after the guy himself as well! Wonder who this accomplice is? I hope Shawn doesn't try to get both without backup! Thank you for continuing this fantastic story!



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