Date: January 01, 2019 8:40 am Title: If at first you don't succeed...
This is such a great story and I'm so sad that it will never be finished. Or will it? I'm praying you find a way to come back to it. I really want to see Shawn kick butt and get whumped. Please come back! This story is too good to leave in wip limbo. Thanks for such a great story!
[Report This]Date: August 05, 2014 12:36 pm Title: What you don't know, can hurt you the most.
Please! Please! Please! Update this story! It's wonder.ful
Date: July 04, 2014 1:39 am Title: If at first you don't succeed...
Wow! This story totally mesmerized me. Any chance you would finish it? I hope so!
[Report This]Date: April 24, 2014 8:26 pm Title: If at first you don't succeed...
Just found this story and I think that it is really great.
I would love to read more if you ever end up finishing it.
[Report This]Date: December 18, 2013 8:14 pm Title: What you don't know, can hurt you the most.
Dude I am loving this!! You're pacing it wonderfully and your characterization of Shawn is super compelling (love me some traumatized!Shawn... and badass!Shawn is IMMINENT I love it)! :)
[Report This]Date: December 12, 2013 3:43 pm Title: What you don't know, can hurt you the most.
This is fantastic and I just love it! You're pacing it perfectly, with a wonderful balance between action and introspection. Suffice to say, I'm glad to be reading!
Date: December 05, 2013 8:13 am Title: If at first you don't succeed...
Sooo I started this story the other day failing to realize it wasn't completed with it. It toom me about two-three days to read it (im very busy) but when i came to the end i just about flipped out! I need more!!! Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: December 03, 2013 8:25 pm Title: If at first you don't succeed...
Woohoo! Shawn's going after him!
Which is also a grave mistake, of course, but still...
Shawn to the rescue!! :)
Date: December 02, 2013 3:53 pm Title: What you don't know, can hurt you the most.
Great Story! Just started reading it today. I read it all you have written and can not wait for you to finish. Very good writing
[Report This]Date: December 02, 2013 12:19 pm Title: If at first you don't succeed...
Nice twist with adding in an accomplice.
This guy is a real bastard and I can't blame Shawn for wanting to take him out. I just don't want him getting hurt in the process either. I can't imagine how hard this whole thing must be for him.
I like how most of this was from Henry's POV. The outside look into what Shawn is thinking and doing was perfect and really lead to the intensity of the scene when they figured out what his game plan is.
Really great job.