Date: April 10, 2013 8:23 pm Title: Who Is Sydney Collins?
A great sequel:) I really like learning about this side of Syd's life, it's so interesting. I liked the twists, suspense that you built up along with some good comedic parts- it's neat seeing her Shawn & Becca sides to her personality. I think you did an awesome job working it in the show's story line, i could picture most of the scenes really well:)
Date: March 14, 2013 5:24 pm Title: Thump Thump
Suggestions??? Um...*looks around nervously* Idk really. But for now go to town with Shawn whump! Like Sdyney finds him dying and she won't let him say his last words (which could be slightly perturbing for him) and she goes into action making sure he lives. Oh! Like a hairs breath from Death...
Date: March 14, 2013 4:37 pm Title: Code Names
BEST CHAPTER YET!!!! Pineapple, Mini-Me, Mr Bean and was Juliet's code name "Sugar?" I had a dejavu with MR YIN PRESENTS when Jules went missing and was kidnapped. Gus screaming "Juliet! JULIET!" Made me think of that. But *grin* at tough Sydney
Author's Response: I know! I can't wait to use tough Sydney more. Don't get me wrong, I love her sweet side but this kick butt side is awesome! As for Sugar, her name was the hardest and I ended up giving her an odd couple pet name. Something goofy Shawn might use.