Date: May 14, 2013 7:57 am Title: Fog
Oh my gosh. This would never happen on the show, the writer's aren't brave enough- but it's perfect right here. So dark in a beautiful way. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you so much. That's all I can say. I appreciate your review. --huge smile--
Date: May 13, 2013 11:27 pm Title: Fog
Wow. Not sure what to say My sick humor would like to make a joke right now but damn.
I liked how you worded the beginning,
He loved me, I was sure of it. As much as I loved him. Maybe that's why he had to kill me.
Very dramatic and instantly made me want to read more. Good job on the good story, but damn!
Author's Response: --grins-- When a review includes positively-directed cuss words, my life feels good. ;-D I'm very glad you liked that part. I always worry about crossing the line between drama and melodrama. Thank you so much! And you can make a joke if you like. I like jokes. :-)
Date: May 13, 2013 10:24 pm Title: Fog
-runs screaming in all directions- omg omg omg omg...wow!! loved it!! aw. thats sad that lassie killed jules though -sniffles- Great job though!
Author's Response: Thank you! So far, I've gotten exactly the responses I was looking for. :-D I think I'm going to add this to the story notes, but the title was inspired by the song Teardrops by the Proclaimers. :-)