Reviewer: hondagirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2013 3:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

This really made me laugh and though you did label it as crack, it is something that I could see happening on the show to the lesser extent. Also I like how you incorporated the infamous Dobson into this as well.


Author's Response: I think Dobson is cool. They have to show him before the show is over. I always thought of him as more of a nerdy do-gooder but wouldn't it be funny if he was this muscular hunk that Lassiter just orders around? Ha!

Reviewer: skylucy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2013 9:17 am Title: Chapter 1

So wonderful (loved the Smoked Trout title!) I really hope they did something like this too on the show to see Trout off and out of there. I can see even Gus agreeing that something like this needed to be done with his "now it's on!"

Author's Response: :) one of the hardest things for me is to come up with story titles, which is weird because I love doing chapter titles... *Shrugs* Glad it was a hit. Thanks a ton!

Reviewer: marniewings Signed starstarstarstarhalf star [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2013 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!! Loved it. Very funny loved the sprinkler part haha.

Author's Response:

Glad you loved it. The sprinkler part just hit me when I was thinking about the smoke bombs. I was all like "Damn, I can't do smoke bombs, the sprinklers would probably go off and someone would say something about it... HELL! Let the sprinklers go off then!" *Insert crazed laughter here*

Reviewer: BlkLunaDragon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2013 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was actually pretty satisfying to read and believable. Good job Red!

Author's Response: I knew I wasn't going to be able to wait almost a year for the guys to give Trout his just desserts and the idea just popped into my head. Was originally going to be a trick to tick off Lassie, as usual, but then I remembered Trout. Tee hee

Reviewer: BlueberryPineapples Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2013 3:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

This seems like something that would actually happen on the show! Well written!

Author's Response: Thanks. I know I put it under crack, but I tried to keep it as realistic as possible.

Reviewer: RavenCullen41319 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2013 10:53 am Title: Chapter 1

This is fantastic!!!!!!! I love this story; you are an amazing writer!!!!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks! I'm truly flattered by your enthusiasm.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2013 6:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!!  I too wish something like this could happen!  Here's hoping the show gives Trout the punishment he truly deserves.  Happy Fourth of July!

Author's Response: Happy Fourth to you as well! I really do hope they get back at him somehow too.



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