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Date: February 27, 2017 1:30 am Title: Technological Wonders

EEEEEEE!!!! New chapter!!! I haven't even read it yet, but I felt the need to express my excitement before doing so. :)

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Date: July 28, 2015 12:05 am Title: Technological Wonders

Omg, I love your writing so much. Honestly, you must update soon, or I'll start going through withdrawal. :)

Author's Response: Lol. Thanks! I'm trying to get some more out.

Reviewer: Dragonflm61 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09, 2014 8:11 pm Title: Technological Wonders

I'm so sorry it's taken me this long to review this first chapter! Great setup for what sounds like a very suspenseful plot. Can't wait!

Author's Response: *Squee* Glad you showed up! I've gotten a bunch more written too. It's gonna be good.

Reviewer: MagicAmethyst80 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28, 2014 6:01 pm Title: Technological Wonders

Glad to see you continuing your Moonlight crossover series. I need to get around to rewatching it at some point.

I love the way you manage to keep the antics between Gus and Shawn fresh, despite how much has changed, with Shawn being a father, not to mention a vampire! The banter between them seems so natural. Lol at the idea of a "player phone."

Felicity is so adorable!

Lassiter the vampire is very well done, I love his new insights into Shawn, and his sensing that Shawn is putting on a front.Very in character for him to be the one serious enough to know when to contact the vampire authorities about something.

You do an amazing job seamlessly integrating Chuck into the mix, via new technology. The idea of a smart phone camera that can tell who is a vampire does an amazing job taking Moonlight, which was a 00s show into 2014.

Can't wait for the next chapter on this, and to see where it is going to go!

Author's Response:

I tried to make the baby as cute as possible. Not a huge fan of kids myself but it will definitely kick his protective instinct into high gear.

:) I love Chuck and adding them a bit to each story is so much fun. I'm really going to have to do the Chuck/Moonlight crossover showing Morgan's side of things.

Reviewer: back2black Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27, 2014 3:31 pm Title: Technological Wonders

I am so glad to see you have written another story to your "Moonlight" series!!

This is very interesting and exciting! I can't wait to see who or what is behind this and how they are going to stop billions of people from buying and using this phone!

And the baby is here! I always pictured Shawn with a daughter rather than a son too. Though the story just started and Shawn hasn't said or done much yet, still he does seem a little..off, maybe even tired and sad. I will look forward to seeing how his relationship with his mother is going, I would hope she would be there for her grandchild for sure, but is her relationship with Shawn even there anymore?

Marlowe wants to be a vampire, I'm wondering does Gus? Does Jules? It doesn't seem likely,(especially given Gus' issues with blood) but it HAS to have crossed their minds, they are both in love with immortals. I know Shawn would be totally against it for both of them, but......

Also hoping for a Pierre sighting!!;)Even if it is just a fleeting glimpse, I'll take it!LOL

Great start! Eagerly awaiting more!!

Author's Response:

 

 (Great to hear from you! Hope all is going well and you are doing okay.)

Wow! Lots of awesome questions! I won't give away too much but I will touch on the whole "Turning" everyone thing. With what they've been through, especially Shawn, they will be reluctant to turn anyone even IF they are asked. 

 

I'm glad you like the baby. Will bring a new element of protective instinct out in the vampires because they know it was a fricken miracle she was conceived before everything happened.

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Date: June 27, 2014 2:35 am Title: Technological Wonders

I forgot you would be posting this story here; mainly because Psychfic still doesn't send me email alerts. Love the pic for the story. I wish I was creative enough to make some for my own.

I'm happy to see that Shawn is doing better, even if he isn't completely back to normal. And I'm also glad Carlton is aware Shawn is putting up a front for everyone. Someone should be aware how Shawn is really doing, to make sure he doesn't slip up or keep him from getting pushed too far. I'm glad the two of them are getting along better; things were really tense between them in the first two stories and I like they have this new respect for each other.

I love how everyone gets all smoochy around a baby. Will we get to see Carlton and Henry like that around Felicity too? I know things are going to get tough for everyone so would like something happy to look forward too as well.

I love this so far and am eagerly waiting for the next chapter. But I love Mirrored Lives too, so I'm willing to wait for an update here in favor of more there.

For now.



Author's Response: Oh, you know papa monkey will definitely be smoochy around the baby. You are right that things are going to be super tough, but you already have a bit of a hint on that ;)

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