Date: January 20, 2015 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ha! I get it!
Cute little story. I really liked the part where Lassiter admitted he was wrong. The beginning part where she was crying was my favorite, though. If you ever decide to expand this, I would suggest adding more to that section.
Good work! :-)
Date: January 11, 2015 1:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Thank you!