Reviewer: DinerGuy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2017 2:58 pm Title: A Special Anniversary.

Awww my heart!!

Reviewer: PineappleHead Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2017 8:40 pm Title: A Special Anniversary.

Sweeeet! I love the metaphor of the vest, and the line about the strings of Kevlar is something that I wish I had thought of first. I love it that you thought of them cremating Yin as your special anniversary. So incredibly unique! Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! :D Yin just keeps delivering on the narrative front.

Reviewer: me_ Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2016 5:28 am Title: A Cold Wind Freaking Blows.

Ha! Shawn imitating Gus was hilarious and pretty much perfect. :D

Reviewer: PineappleHead Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21, 2015 10:44 am Title: A Tale of two Kitties.

Argh! Love this idea. I love it that you took a different approach and used a different meaning of "kitty" than everyone else I've read so far. I love creativity, and I never would have thought of that. This is great! I also like it that you contrasted Shawn and Juliet before you brought them together. That was just a really nice touch. :-)
Good job, as always!

Reviewer: dragonnan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2015 1:25 am Title: Walking in the Moonlight.

Wow, the mood of this is stunning!  Relief colliding with distress and all becoming this hum of anxiety.  Because there is just TOO MUCH that was riding the fine edge of complete disaster.  If any one piece of this had been played differently, everything would have been lost.  And we've all known that shocky feeling; of "that was too close".  Even something like nearly dropping a plate but just catching it with your fingertips.  But yet the mind has continued the tumble to the ground and already lived through the crash and your heart cannot stop pounding.  You've encompassed that terrible relief so excellently, here!  

Author's Response: I am so glad you wrote this, because I really wasn't sure I did a good job conveying those emotions. 200 words were a bit short for what I wanted to do, I'm afraid. Thanks, Drag!

Reviewer: me_ Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2015 1:07 pm Title: No Body No Crime.

Wow, dark. Funny though. :)

Author's Response: Hah, exactly what I wanted then. XD Thanks!

Reviewer: CosmicAddress Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2015 5:12 pm Title: Say it like you mean it.

This is true friendship.

Reviewer: PineappleHead Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2015 2:22 pm Title: Juliet is late.

Ha! This is excellent. Good writing, great build-up, and fantastic zinger for the last line.

Reviewer: me_ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2015 6:04 pm Title: Juliet is late.

Lol, this is way better than mine! But that also means I got to read something awesome, so yay! :)



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