Date: July 14, 2017 8:40 pm Title: A Special Anniversary.
Sweeeet! I love the metaphor of the vest, and the line about the strings of Kevlar is something that I wish I had thought of first. I love it that you thought of them cremating Yin as your special anniversary. So incredibly unique! Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :D Yin just keeps delivering on the narrative front.
Date: November 21, 2015 10:44 am Title: A Tale of two Kitties.
Argh! Love this idea. I love it that you took a different approach and used a different meaning of "kitty" than everyone else I've read so far. I love creativity, and I never would have thought of that. This is great! I also like it that you contrasted Shawn and Juliet before you brought them together. That was just a really nice touch. :-)
Good job, as always!
Date: September 22, 2015 1:25 am Title: Walking in the Moonlight.
Wow, the mood of this is stunning! Relief colliding with distress and all becoming this hum of anxiety. Because there is just TOO MUCH that was riding the fine edge of complete disaster. If any one piece of this had been played differently, everything would have been lost. And we've all known that shocky feeling; of "that was too close". Even something like nearly dropping a plate but just catching it with your fingertips. But yet the mind has continued the tumble to the ground and already lived through the crash and your heart cannot stop pounding. You've encompassed that terrible relief so excellently, here!
Author's Response: I am so glad you wrote this, because I really wasn't sure I did a good job conveying those emotions. 200 words were a bit short for what I wanted to do, I'm afraid. Thanks, Drag!