Date: June 09, 2015 8:04 pm Title: Serious
Why would Shawn take that bet?
Seems like he'll never learn. But this was cute and I enjoyed it!
I know there was a word limit for the challenge, but if you ever chose to expand this one thing I would recommend is breaking up the dialogue with some action sentences. Have them move around, get us into someone's head, there is some fun to be had with it.
Even though we all know Shawn is going to lose this bet.
Author's Response: Good advice. Seeing as I ended up winning it (somehow), I already know next week's challenge, and so I drafted an idea that has more description. It's actually all description except for one part. And of course he'll lose the bet, he wouldn't be Shawn Spencer if he didn't.