Date: August 26, 2015 10:11 pm Title: Prologue
You've been kind enough to review my stories, so I'll review yours. :)
The first chapter had me intrigued. Even though it wasn't all that long, I could easily visualize what was described.
The second chapter was also great, and definitely in character. I liked the reference to Lassie's surprise birthday party. :)
Anyways, great job, and I can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! You made my day. :-) Later chapters will definitely be longer; I just wanted to post a teaser until I can get some more written. Thanks again! I appreciate it. :-)