Reviewer: elephantlover1123 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2016 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was definitely really well-written, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I was a little confused on why Shawn leaves in the first place, but the writing definitely makes up for that. Loved it!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing; I'm glad you enjoyed it! Poor Shawn has amnesia and is all drugged up... I think he left the hospital out of a mix of confusion and fear.

Reviewer: Alyssa Veale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2016 4:39 am Title: Chapter 1

It is a great story. It has all the elements that are required for a story to be interesting. I liked the way you time lined your story. Story writing is a difficult task which requires immaculate writing skills. To write my paper has many services which will helpful to solve this dilemma.

Reviewer: Psych_Babe Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2015 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 2

OOh that was really amazing. Very well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! *bows* I am super happy to hear you liked it; thanks for taking the time to let me know!!

Reviewer: Psych_Babe Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2015 7:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooh interesting start so far. onto the next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing both chapters to let me know what you thought as you went along. You are a rock star! :)

Reviewer: Androuska Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2015 8:19 am Title: Chapter 1

This is very intriguing. I'm not sure exactly what is going on, why Shawn disappeared but I'm very interested to find out what will happen next. Can't wait to read the next instalment. Please continue soon...

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I do apologize I haven't updated yet. I think it's this post NaNoWriMo hangover that I underestimated. ;) Working on the next update now; hopefully it'll be up soon for you!

Reviewer: insert56 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24, 2015 9:38 am Title: Chapter 1

MORE! MORE! MORE! NO! MORE!

Author's Response: So I should assume you want more? :P I definitely have plans to update in the next week; I have about a third (ish) of the next chapter written so far. Thanks for the review and the rating in the meantime; you rock, dude!



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