Reviews For Ronaldo
Reviewer: Squiggles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2022 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 23


Reviewer: Shules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2022 4:44 am Title: Chapter 23

I really loved this! Great job

Reviewer: Gwen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2019 12:25 am Title: Chapter 22

This story is epic! I love this story and I really enjoyed this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. :-D This is the most complex and intriguing story I have read outside of an Anne Rice novel. You're a really fantastic writer!

I first found this story about a year ago on and I'm so happy to see that you are still adding to it! Yay!!!

Author's Response: Hey, I know you posted this review almost a year and a half ago, but regardless, thanks a million! It means a lot!

Reviewer: Meezer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2017 11:51 am Title: Chapter 16

Really great writing - very intrigued by this story. Looking forward to reading the rest!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: harakiri Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2017 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

I seem to have missed a couple updates but now that I am completely up-to-date again, all I can say is: the more I read, the better (and more intriguing) this story becomes. I love the characters, the drama, the mystery, the atmosphere, the tone. As always, I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Author's Response: Thanks, man! I hope you continue to enjoy!

Reviewer: harakiri Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2017 4:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

I need to read mooorrrreeeeee~

Everything about this gets more intriguing with every chapter. I would love to know more about what the others are up to, too!

Author's Response: Also have neglected to respond to this one; also want to say thanks! As for the others, they will be entering the story in a bigger way later on, but hopefully you enjoyed (...maybe not the right word) the second-most-recent installment.

Reviewer: me_ Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24, 2016 1:47 am Title: Chapter 1

This story is so beautifully elaborite.

Author's Response: I realized I never responded to this one so here I am saying thank you! Hahah, "elaborate" is definitely a word I would use. I can't believe such a complex plot has grown out of the simple idea I had four years ago.

Reviewer: harakiri Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2016 6:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

At first I wasn't sure what to think of this, but the more I read the more interesting the story gets. I'm really looking forward to where you're going with it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope it delivers!

Reviewer: dragonnan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2016 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 4

I am REALLY fascinated by this story!  It's BEYOND creative and it is so eerie and dreamlike and all the strangeness has me desperate to know what's going on!  I love that Shawn is a combination of muted anxiety and drifting along in a state of unaware compliance.  There is CLEARLY something at work and if he weren't so muzzy and bemused I feel his brain would be screaming at him about what's happening! The build up is really fantastic and I am so happy you posted this!  I can't wait to see where you go with this!

Author's Response: This is objectively the best kind of review—not just saying you like it or don't, but explaining why. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: me_ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2016 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1

I read and reviewed this on, but I thought I'd tell you how much I like it again here. I get so excited every time you update, because I'm always waiting to see the next little bit of mystery unravel. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! The other day I just made an account here on a whim, thinking maybe I could reach a slightly broader audience. In exchange for your kind words I shall let you know that chapter 15 ought to be up in the next few days—probably by the end of the weekend. Thanks again!

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