Date: March 11, 2017 12:52 pm Title: Deliver Me
Owwwwwch! Owww! Like, a lot a lot a lot of pain! You almost made me cry. Just . . . just . . . owwwwwwww >.<
You did a really great job. I'm a Christian, which puts a whole different spin on things from my perspective, but I think you totally nailed this. ^^
And did I mention this hurts?
I'm sufficiently depressed now.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's great to get some feedback, especially from a fellow Christian writer. I'm delighted that you liked it---and also, I feed on your tears. ;-) Thanks again!